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【題目】假設(shè)你是晨光中學(xué)的學(xué)生李津。你在某網(wǎng)站的論壇上讀到一位名為Chris的外國(guó)學(xué)生發(fā)的帖子，得知他去年，雖語(yǔ)言不通但借助翻譯軟件的幫助，到幾個(gè)不同的國(guó)家旅游，基本順利。他疑惑有了翻譯軟件，今后是不是就沒(méi)有必要學(xué)習(xí)外語(yǔ)了。請(qǐng)根據(jù)以下提示給Chris留言：

（1）還有必要繼續(xù)學(xué)習(xí)外語(yǔ)；

（2）翻譯軟件的缺點(diǎn)，如準(zhǔn)確性及時(shí)性，適用場(chǎng)合等等；

（3）掌握外語(yǔ)的好處。

注意：（1）詞數(shù)不少于100；

（2）可適當(dāng)加入細(xì)節(jié)，使內(nèi)容充實(shí)、行文連貫；

（3）開頭已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。

	Translation Apps In,Foreign Languages Out? Posted on May 27th,2020 9:00 PM
	.........With translation apps on hand,I wonder whether learning foreign languages is necessary in the future?

	Reply to Chris Posted on May 27th,2020 16:00 PM
	Hi, Chris,

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Answer 1

【答案】Hi, Chris,

I learned from the forum that you have traveled to several different countries with the help of translation APPs. But you are wondering whether we need to learn a foreign language in the future.

In my opinion, it is necessary for us to learn foreign languages. First of all, translation APPs also have shortcomings. For example, it is not only inaccurate, but also it is not timely enough. There are also some situations in which translation APPs are not available. In addition, mastering a foreign language also has many advantages. By learning a foreign language well, we can not only communicate freely but also feel its cultural charm.

So I think it is necessary for us to learn foreign languages.

Yours,

Li Jin

【解析】

本篇書面表達(dá)屬于應(yīng)用文。要求給Chris說(shuō)明學(xué)習(xí)外語(yǔ)的重要性。

第一步：審題

體裁：應(yīng)用文。

時(shí)態(tài)：根據(jù)提示，時(shí)態(tài)應(yīng)為一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)。

結(jié)構(gòu)：總分法。

要求：

1.還有必要繼續(xù)學(xué)習(xí)外語(yǔ)；

2.翻譯軟件的缺點(diǎn)，如準(zhǔn)確性及時(shí)性，適用場(chǎng)合等等；

3.掌握外語(yǔ)的好處。

第二步：列提綱（重點(diǎn)短語(yǔ)）

learned from；with the help of；shortcomings；are not available；communicate freely；cultural charm

第三步：連詞成句

1.I learned from the forum that you have traveled to several different countries translation APPs.

2.First of all, translation APPs also have shortcomings.

3.There are also some situations in which translation APPs are not available.

4.By learning a foreign language well, we can not only communicate freely but also feel its cultural charm.

根據(jù)提示及關(guān)鍵詞（組）進(jìn)行遣詞造句，注意主謂一致和時(shí)態(tài)問(wèn)題。

第四步：連句成篇

1.表示文章結(jié)構(gòu)順序：歸納上文；提出觀點(diǎn)；最后總結(jié)。

2.表示并列補(bǔ)充關(guān)系：In my opinion,；First of all,；also

第五步：潤(rùn)色修改