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7．假設(shè)你是新華中學(xué)的學(xué)生李華，想邀請來蘭州參加淘寶網(wǎng)甘肅館一周年慶�；顒拥陌⒗锇桶褪紫瘓�(zhí)行官馬云來你校做一次成人禮的演講，請你給馬云首席寫一封邀請信，內(nèi)容包括：
1．說明寫信的目的；
2．說明演講的具體安排--時間：4月28日；地點：學(xué)校禮堂，主題：怎樣通過個人奮斗實現(xiàn)人生理想；
3．表達感謝與祝福．
注意：1．詞數(shù)100左右，開頭和結(jié)尾已為你寫好，不計入總詞數(shù)；
2．可適當增加細節(jié)，以使行文連貫；
3．參考詞匯：畢業(yè)典禮演講 adult ceremony speech
Dear Mayun，CEO of Ali Baba，
  My name is Li Hua．I'm a Senior 3 student from Xinhua Middle School．May I have the honor to invite you to give us an adultceremony speech on behalf of all the teachers and students of our school？The speech is scheduled to be given on April，28 at the school hall，the theme of which will behow to realize our dreams through personal efforts． We are eager to hearyou talk about your own experiences and unique views． I sincerely hope youcan take your time from your busy schedule，and I would appreciate it very much if you can come．Thank you in advance andwish you all the best．
I am looking forward to receiving your reply at your earliestconvenience．
Yours Sincerely
Li Hua．

Answer 1

分析 本文是一篇提綱作文．根據(jù)所提供的材料信息，寫一封信，邀請來蘭州參加淘寶網(wǎng)甘肅館一周年慶祝活動的阿里巴巴首席執(zhí)行官馬云來校做一次成人禮的演講．
寫作要點包括：1．說明寫信的目的； 2．說明演講的具體安排：時間：4月28日；地點：學(xué)校禮堂；主題：怎樣通過個人奮斗實現(xiàn)人生理想； 3．表達感謝與祝福． 寫作時應(yīng)以一般現(xiàn)在時為主．人稱以第一人稱為主．
重要短語：invite sb to do sth（邀請某人做某事），on behalf of （代表），be scheduled to（預(yù)計，計劃做某事），realize our dreams （實現(xiàn)某人的夢想），be eager to （渴望做某事），in advance （提前），adapt to （適應(yīng)）．
【高分句型】
1．The speech is scheduled to be given on April，28 at the school hall，the theme of which will be how to realize our dreams throughpersonal efforts．
這里是"介詞+which/who"引導(dǎo)的非限制性定語從句，具體結(jié)構(gòu)為"the+名詞+of which/who"，在從句中作主語．演講預(yù)定于4月28日在學(xué)校禮堂舉行，主題為"怎樣通過個人奮斗實現(xiàn)人生理想"．
2．I would appreciate it very much if you can come．
這是it作形式賓語用法，真正的賓語是if you can come．如果你能來我會很感激．

解答 Dear Mayun，CEO of Ali Baba，
My name isLi Hua．I'm a student from Xinhua High School． May I have the honor to invite you to give us an adultceremony speech on behalf of all the teachers and students of our school？（說明寫信的目的） The speech is scheduled to be given onApril，28 at the school hall，the theme of which will be how to realize our dreams throughpersonal efforts．【高分句型】We are eager to hear youtalk about your own experiences and unique views．（說明演講的時間、地點、主題）
I sincerely hope you can take your time from your busy schedule，and I would appreciate itvery much if you can come．【高分句型】Thank you in advance and wish you all the best．
I am looking forward to receiving your reply at your earliestconvenience．（表達感謝與祝福）
 
Yours sincerely 
Li Hua

點評 提綱作文在寫作時要注意內(nèi)容是否包含了所有要點，并適當增加細節(jié)．寫作時注意準確運用時態(tài)，上下文意思連貫，符合邏輯關(guān)系，盡量使用自己熟悉的單詞句式，同時也要注意使用高級詞匯和高級句型使文章顯得更有檔次，平時需注意積累短語和重要句型．