Question

【題目】假設你是紅星中學高三學生李華。請根據以下四幅圖的先后順序，寫一篇英文周記，記述你與父母共度周末的全過程。

注意：詞數不少于 60。 提示詞：攀巖 rock climbing

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Answer 1

【答案】Last Friday night, faced with overwhelming academic tasks, I found myself on the verge of breaking down. With Gaokao approaching day by day, I was under great pressure. Having noticed all this, Mom suggested I relax a little bit during the weekend.

The next morning, my parents and I went to the park for a walk. The pavement there was covered with fallen leaves in yellow and orange, creating a unique scenery for this season. Holding a leaf in hand, I casually exchanged anecdotes with my parents, feeling the relaxation that I had been missing for a long time.

After lunch, we went rock climbing. Though the wall was high and steep, I was determined to conquer it. With my parents’ encouragement, I eventually managed to reach the top. At that moment, my confidence was restored.

On Monday morning, my parents saw me off at the school gate. Their warm smiles and raised thumbs filled me with energy. I waved them goodbye and promised to devote myself to the preparation for Gaokao. This weekend would go a long way with me as it was a new starting point, from which I believe I could go far.

【解析】

本文書面表達屬于看圖作文。

第1步：根據提示可知，本文是一篇看圖作文：假設你是紅星中學高三學生李華。請根據以下四幅圖的先后順序，寫一篇英文周記，記述你與父母共度周末的全過程。

第2步：根據寫作要求確定關鍵詞，如：faced with overwhelming academic tasks（面對繁重的學業任務）；With Gaokao approaching day by day（隨著高考的日益臨近）；eventually managed to reach the top（最終到達了山頂）等。

第3步：根據提示及關鍵詞（組）進行遣詞造句，注意主謂一致和時態語態問題。

第4步：連句成文，注意使用恰當的連詞進行句子之間的銜接與過渡，書寫一定要規范清晰，保持整潔美觀的卷面是非常重要的。