Question

下面短文中有10處語言錯誤，請在有錯誤的地方增加、刪除或修改某個單詞。

增加：在缺詞處加一個漏詞符號（∧），并在其下面寫上該加的詞。

刪除：把多余的詞用斜線（﹨）劃掉。

修改：在錯的詞下劃一橫線，并在該詞下面寫上修改后的詞。

注意：

1．每處錯誤及其修改均僅限一詞；

2．只允許修改10處，多者（從第11處起）不計分。

People born in the year of the horse are extremely animated, active and energetic. Horses love to be in a crowd and like entertainment. They have sense of humor and they love to take center stage and delight the audience anywhere. They are trustworthy, friendly and like to be surrounded by their relatives and friends. They usually had a large circle of acquaintances, and they never rely on their friends too much. Sometimes, the horse is a little self-centered, but it doesn't mean that he would not be interested in any problems except her own. However, a horse person is really more cunning than intelligent, that is probably due to the fact that most horse people lack in confidence. Sometimes, they are very dependent and rarely listen to advices.

 

Answer 1

【答案】

 

 have∧a

 anywhere 改成everywhere

 had改成have

 and改成but

 would改成 will

 her改成 his

 that加and/ which

 去掉in

 dependent改成 independent

 advices改成 advice

【解析】

試題分析：文章介紹屬馬的人的個性特點(diǎn)：友好，幽默，自信，值得信任等等。

 句意：他們有幽默感。A sense of humour幽默感：have∧a

 句意：他們喜歡站在舞臺中間使各地的觀眾高興。anywhere 改成everywhere

 句意：他們有一個很大的熟人圈。因?yàn)檫@篇文章用的是一般現(xiàn)在時，所以had改成have

 上文是：他們有一個很大的熟人圈。下文說：他們不依賴朋友，說明這兩句話是轉(zhuǎn)折關(guān)系：and改成but

 但是這并不意味著他對除了自己的問題不感興趣。主句用一般現(xiàn)在時，從句用一般將來時：would 改成will

 因?yàn)榍懊娴闹髡Z用了he，所以形容詞性物主代詞是：her改成 his

 屬馬的人很狡猾很聰明，這可能是因?yàn)榇蠖鄶?shù)屬馬的人缺乏自信。并列句少and，如果是定語從句，應(yīng)該將that改成which

 lack做動詞可以是及物的，不用介詞，如果當(dāng)成不及物動詞，后面應(yīng)該加for，所以去掉in

 有時他們很獨(dú)立，從不聽別人的建議。根據(jù)句意要將dependent改成 independent

 advice是不可數(shù)名詞，不能用復(fù)數(shù)：advices改成 advice

考點(diǎn)：考查短文改錯