Question

13．閱讀下面的短文，然后按照要求寫一篇150詞左右的英語短文．
     In junior high school，one of my classmates，Ethan，was addicted to TV．This boy simply knew everything about such pop shows as Who's the Boss？
     Then one day Ethan's mother made brim an offer in order to draw him back to his school subjects．She promised that she would give him 200ifhecouldgoafullmonthwithoutwatchinganyTV．NoneofusthoughtEthancoulddoit，buthedidquitewell．Hismompaidhim200．He went out and bought a TV，the biggest he could find．
      In recent years，hundreds of schools have carried out experiments with paying kids with each for showing up or getting good grades．All school kids admire this trend．But it upsets adults．Teachers say that we are rewarding kids for doing what they should be doing of their own will．Psychologists warn that money can actually make kids perform worse by making the act of learning cheap．The debate has become a typical battle over why our kids are not learning at the rate they should he despite decades of reforms and budget increases．
[寫作內容]
1以約30詞概括上文的主要內容．
2以約120詞對用金錢鼓勵孩子學習的現象進行議論，內容包括：
（1）你對用金錢鼓勵孩子學習的看法：
（2）你的父母（或其他親人）是如何鼓勵你學習的；
（3）你認為怎樣才能更好地鼓勵孩子學習．
[寫作要求]
1作文中可以使用親身經歷或虛構的故事．也可以參照閱讀材料的內容，但不得直接引用原文中的句子．
2作文中不能出現真實姓名和學校名稱．
[評分標準]
概括準確，語言規范，內容合適，語篇連貫．

Answer 1

分析 本文是讀寫任務型寫作，這類作文可按照三段式模板寫：第一段：概況所給短文要點．第二段：過渡詞引出主題句---闡述理由或影響．第三段：個人觀點．特別要注意第一段的概括．用自己的語言概括，不能照搬照抄原文．時態一般以一般現在時為主．人稱以第三稱為主．重要短語：show up （炫耀），in order to（為了），encourage sb to do…．（鼓勵某人做某事），on the contrary （相反），make progress（進步），be confronted with（遇到），make up my mind （下定決心），live up to…（不辜負…）．

解答 The passage mainly tells us that parents give money to their children so that they can show up or get good grades recently by the way of taking the example of Ethan and his mother．（概括）
Some schools，teachers and parents give their students or kids money as a stimulating means in order to encourage them to do what they should do effectively．【高分句型】This phenomenon is common in recent years and it is welcomed by most of the young．I don't think it is an effective way．，on the contrary it may lead to the opposite result．（對用金錢鼓勵孩子學習的看法）
My parents and family often tell me some encouraging stories in ancient or modern times such as Li Bai，ZhouEnlai and so on．Each time I make a little progress in my study，they always praise me with open arms，and whenever I am confronted with difficulties，my family always stand my side．【高分句型】I feel comfortable and warm in my heart for what they do for me．I make up my mind that I will live up to my family and my homeland．（父母如何鼓勵你學習）
I think，as a student myself，school and parents should educate their kids through teaching them to study for their family and their motherland rather than giving them money to let them passively do something．Only by building up some noble and long-range arms can they study on their own initiative．【高分句型】（自己觀點）

點評 讀寫任務型寫作是將閱讀與寫作有機結合，要求考生既能讀懂文章信息，又要依據要求規范連貫地表達內容，其中準確概括很有挑戰且十分重要，根據記敘文、議論文、說明文等不同文體作相應概括，總的來說，遵循以下步驟：確定主題句；尋找關鍵詞；重構主題句；重組支持句．寫作時注意準確運用時態，上下文意思連貫，符合邏輯關系，盡量使用自己熟悉的單詞句式，同時也要注意使用高級詞匯和高級句型使文章顯得更有檔次，平時需注意積累短語和重要句型．