Question

2．在繁重的課業負擔之下，中學生也應該學會適度地自我放松，請你圍繞"Ways to get relaxed"這一話題，按照下列要點寫一篇英語短文：
1．自我放松的途徑：看電視、體育鍛煉、上網等
2．我更喜歡的途徑及理由：…
注意：
   （1）在表達"我更喜歡的途徑及理由"時，請從要點1中選擇一項進行闡述．
   （2）詞數：100左右，文章開頭已給出（不計詞數）．
There are various ways to get relaxed for middle school students．_______________________________________________________

Answer 1

分析 這是一篇提綱作文，讓我們寫一篇關于Ways to get relaxed的作文，這需要我們發揮英語思維，將提供的信息用英語完整流暢的表達出來．寫作需要用第一人稱，時態主要是一般現在時，內容要點包括：自我放松的途徑有看電視、體育鍛煉、上網等；我更喜歡的途徑及理由．我們此篇作文分為兩部分，第一部分為中學生自我放松的途徑．第二部分為作者最喜歡的自我放松途徑及理由．
重點短語與句型：
get relaxed 放松
take exercise 鍛煉
as well也，還，和
 appeal to 呼吁；對…有吸引力
at home and abroad國內外
高分句型一：We can also watch TV，where we are able to enjoy varieties of colorful programs both in Chinese and English as well．此句用了where 引導非限制性定語從句
高分句型二：For another，the Internet makes it easy for me to make friends with people both at home and abroad，for it is a great joy to communicate with them．此句用了it 作形式主語，不定式為真正主語．

解答 There are various ways to get relaxed for middle school students．One way is to take exercise by walking，running，playing basketball or football，etc．We can also watch TV，where we are able to enjoy varieties of colorful programs both in Chinese and English as well（高分句型一）．Moreover，we can surf the Internet to get some relaxation and entertainment．（中學生自我放松的途徑）    
As for me，surfing the Internet appeals to me most．For one thing，the Internet offers a wide range of activities for relaxation．In general，I keep track of the latest news as an enjoyment．Sometimes，I play computer games to refresh myself．For another，the Internet makes it easy for me to make friends with people both at home and abroad，for it is a great joy to communicate with them．（高分句型二）In addition，having a glimpse of the vivid pictures and live videos on the Internet contributes to regaining my energy．（作者最喜歡的自我放松途徑及理由）

點評 英語寫作是一項主觀性較強的測試題．它不僅考查學生的寫作基礎而且還考查學生在寫作過程中綜合運用語言的能力．在撰寫時要注意主謂語一致，時態呼應，用詞貼切等．要提高英語寫作水平，需要兩方面的訓練：一是語言基礎方面的訓練，要有扎實 的造句、翻譯等基本功，即用詞法、句法等知識造出正確無誤的句子；二是寫作知識和能力 方面的訓練以掌握寫作方面的基本方法和技巧．