Question

【題目】High,guys.After the hard and tiring week, I’m dying for something new,something that can get us really high at the priceless weekend.Let’s brainstorm a truly fun activity to make us relaxed and prepared to live our next week’s life. No time for a meeting,so why not contribute your ideas to the club by writing to me at JohnLee@yahoo.com.Your commitment is greatly appreciated.

以上是你所在社團的主席John Lee的微博上的一則信息，請寫一則100詞左右的短信回復該信息。

要求包括：

1. 你建議的活動；

2. 如此建議的原因；

3. 活動的安排。

Dear John,

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Answer 1

【答案】Dear John,

I don’t think there would be a better choice than all the club members, going cycling to the countryside. After the long and stressful week of studies, we are definitely in want of some physical exercise to liberate ourselves from the academic routine and give us a lift. Equally importantly, who won’t say it’s a feast for us city dwellers breathing the fresher air and seeing the rural landscape?

Needless to say, the success of the activity is largely dependent on our careful planning. How about meeting at the school gate at 8:00 and riding home after a picnic lunch in the countryside?

With these words, I can’t help picturing our club having the longed- for fun together!

【解析】這是一篇圖表類的作文。本篇范文信息點齊全，文章意思連貫，語言表達地道。另外，某些過渡詞語的使用以及一些教高級句型的使用也是本篇的亮點。文章使用第一人稱單數，時態采用一般現在時態。注意闡明建議的原因以及安排。

動名詞作狀語。I don’t think there would be a better choice than all the club members, going cycling to the countryside.

賓語從句。Equally importantly, who won’t say it’s a feast for us city dwellers breathing the fresher air and seeing the rural landscape?