Question

學校英語論壇針對目前城市交通擁堵、污染嚴重的問題進行了“治堵方案大家談”的討論。以下是討論概要。

【寫作內容】請根據以上概要寫一篇短文，包括以下內容：
1、存在的問題；     2、解決的方案；      3、方案的好處。
【寫作要求】只能用5個句子表達全部內容。
【評分標準】句子結構準確，信息內容完整，篇章結構連貫。

Answer 1

Nowadays, the problem of traffic jams in cities is as serious as that of air pollution. Some suggested solutions to these problems include a reduction in the use of private cars and an increase in the practice of car-pooling, where one car is shared by several workmates or friends. In addition, the government could improve the public transport system in order to make it more convenient for people. The government should also encourage cycling by building more green lanes. This will help save money, time and energy as well as improve the environment.

解析試題分析：考查提綱作文，考生首先要仔細審題，話題是目前城市交通擁堵、污染嚴重的問題進行了“治堵方案大家談”的討論，要點是以表格給出；要考慮以下幾個方面：（1）層次結構，（2）句子的時態（3）內容要點。尤其是內容要點要把握準確到位，要點需要考生拿捏準確以及正確，因為只能使用5個句子表達全部的內容。又要包括所有的要點，考生要注意盡可能使句子的表達形式多樣化，適當的使用一些高級句式和高級詞匯，以提高書面表達的檔次和可讀性。考生要多使用復雜句，一句話中多包含些信息，如范文里面的句子Some suggested solutions to these problems include a reduction in the use of private cars and an increase in the practice of car-pooling, where one car is shared by several workmates or friends.既有賓語從句，又有定語從句。
考點：提綱作文。
點評：作文要層次清晰，要點全面，表達流暢，切合作文要求，句子結構準確，信息內容完整，篇章結構連貫。文中使用一些極佳的詞語和句子為文章增色，使用高級詞匯及句型。