Question

目前，中學生花錢大手大腳已成為一個令學校難以管理的問題。下面是一份關于零花錢的調查報告。請你以此為依據，寫一篇100詞左右的短文，呼吁大家關注此問題。短文的開頭已給出，但不計入總詞數。

來源	父母給的生活費
用途	多數用來買零食，MP4，新潮衣服或支付上網費用；少數用來支付生活費
危害	不知掙錢辛苦；盲目攀比；還可能沾染一些其他不良習慣
呼吁	……

注意：

可根據內容適當增減細節，使語句連貫，符合邏輯，表達準確。

Nowadays, middle school students tend to be very free with their pocket money, which has become a difficult problem to solve for schools.

 

Answer 1

【答案】

Nowadays, middle school students tend to be very free with their pocket money, which has become a difficult problem to solve for schools.

Generally, parents give their children some money every month as their living expenses. However, some students spend less on regular meals and everyday goods to save their pocket money with which they buy snacks, MP4 players, fashionable clothes and so on. What's worse, they spend it on playing computer games or surfing the Internet. Therefore, they don't know how hard it is to earn money. In addition, they are so young that they may learn to worship those with lots of pocket money blindly and fall into the bad habit.

In order to help the students, we should call on parents monitoring the pocket money. The school should take proper measures to educate the students and make them build up the good value of consuming.

【解析】

試題分析：考查開放性作文的寫作。本文是一份關于零花錢的調查報告，需要考生從中學生使用零花錢的現狀，存在的問題，你認為應該如何合理使用零花錢等三個方面展開。寫作時注意準確運用時態，上下文意思連貫，符合邏輯關系，盡量使用自己熟悉的單詞句式，同時也要注意使用高級詞匯和高級句型使文章顯得更有檔次。特別注意在選擇句式時要賦予變化。

考點：考查開放性作文的寫作。

點評：開放性作文只給出了一個話題，給考生自由發揮的余地很大。對于考生的綜合能力要求較高，要求考生有很強的謀篇布局的能力和組織要點的能力。在完成開放性作文時，首先要選擇自己熟悉的短語或者句型，在你的能力范圍之內，選擇句式時要賦予變化，因為這樣你才可以更好的駕馭。同時也要選擇合適的連接詞，把各個要點組織成一個完整的整體，如besides, further, last but not least等。在發表個人觀點的時候，可以使用諺語來提升整個文章的檔次和文采，也能增加得高分的可能性。