Question

  假定英語課上老師要求同桌之間交換修改作文，請你修改你同桌寫的以下作文。文中共有10處語言錯誤，每句中最多有兩處。每處錯誤僅涉及一個單詞的增加、刪除或修改。增加：在缺詞處加一個漏字符號(A) ，并在其下面寫出該加的詞。刪除：把多余的詞用斜線(\) 劃掉。修改：在錯的詞下畫一橫線，并在該詞下面寫出修改后的詞。注意：1. 每處錯誤及其修改均僅限一詞；

2. 只允許修改10處，多者(從第11處起) ，不計分。

  Dear friends,I have some advices about computers to share with you. Now the computer had become a good friend of us students. It has made our life more co?lourful. We can get information fast under its help. Through the Internet we can talk with people thousands of miles far away.

  However,there have some disadvantages. It gives us some trouble. I'm afraid that we spend a bit too much time play games in front of the screen. Our studies and health are getting worse. Our parents are beginning to worry us. In addition,we surely have less time leaving to get together with others. In this case,the com?puter is taking away our human nature.

  My suggestion is that we would use the computer to improve our life and work on the one hand,and enjoy the sunshine or fresh air with our friends on the other.

Answer 1

Dear friends,I have some advices about computers to share advice with you.  Now the computer had become a good friend of us has students. It has made our life more colourful. We can get infor?mation fast under its help. Through the Internet we can talk with with people thousands of miles "Taj^ away.

However,there have some disadvantages. It gives us some are trouble. I'm afraid that we spend a bit too much time play playing games in front of the screen. Our studies and health are getting worse. Our parents are beginning to worry A us. In addition,about we surely have less time leaving to get together with others. In left this case,the computer is taking away our human nature.

My suggestion is that we would use the computer to imshould prove our life and work on the one hand? and enjoy the sunshine or fresh air with our friends on the other,and