Question

2．請閱讀下面圖畫，按要求用英語寫一篇詞數(shù)為120左右的短文．內(nèi)容包括：

（1）描述畫面；
（2）概述其含義；
（3）談?wù)剛�人感想．
注意：
（1）短文開頭已給出，不計入總詞數(shù)；
（2）可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫；
（3）短文中不能出現(xiàn)與本人相關(guān)的信息；
參考詞匯：鑿，鉆：bore
In the picture，we can see a boy in worn clothes，sitting at a shabby wooden table with a pile of books on it．A weak ray of light came in through a small hole in the wall and he was absorbed in his reading．
This is a well-known story from ancient Chinese idiom．The boy，being poor，couldn't afford even a candle，so he bored a hole in the wall to"steal"light from his neighbor‘s house to read at night．The moral of the story is to spare no effort to acquire knowledge and never get discouraged easily no matter how difficult the situation may be．
Of course，things are totally different today．It is not the story itself but what is reflected in the story that counts．Hard work pays off．We should take pains to improve ourselves through learning and get prepared for the future．．

Answer 1

分析 本文為看圖作文，主題是古時候的一則成語"鑿壁偷光"．寫作時可按"三段式"來寫，首先描述圖片點明主題，然后分析概述其含義，最后發(fā)表感想．基本時態(tài)為一般現(xiàn)在時，人稱以第三人稱為主．重要短語：a ray of 一絲…..），be absorbed in（完全投入到…..），spare no effort（不遺余力），get discouraged（泄氣），pay off（獲得報償），take pains to do （努力做），get prepared for（為…..做準(zhǔn)備）．

解答 In the picture，we can see a boy in worn clothes，sitting at a shabby wooden table with a pile of books on it．【高分句型】A weak ray of light came in through a small hole in the wall and he was absorbed in his reading．（描述圖片）
This is a well-known story from ancient Chinese idiom．The boy，being poor，couldn't afford even a candle，so he bored a hole in the wall to"steal"light from his neighbor‘s house to read at night．The moral of the story is to spare no effort to acquire knowledge and never get discouraged easily no matter how difficult the situation may be．（概述含義）
Of course，things are totally different today．It is not the story itself but what is reflected in the story that counts．Hard work pays off．【高分句型】We should take pains to improve ourselves through learning and get prepared for the future．（個人感想）

點評 寫作看圖作文時，首先認(rèn)真看圖，結(jié)合圖片和文字，確定所要表達(dá)的主題是什么，然后圍繞主題，提煉要點，合理想象，對譯出的要點通過合理的組合，加上必要的連接詞使表達(dá)連貫．同時也要注意使用高級詞匯和高級句型使文章顯得更有檔次，平時需注意積累短語和重要句型．