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據統計，我國高中生的近視率高達80%。請根據下面的建議，給某英文報社寫一篇短文，幫助同學們保護眼睛。

1．不要長時間用眼；

2．養成良好的讀書習慣，如：保持眼睛與書的距離，不在太陽或微弱的燈光下讀書，不在床上或移動的車上讀書；

3．定期做眼保健操。

4．至少每兩年做一次視力檢查。

注意：1.詞數：100左右(開頭已給出，但不計入總詞數)；2.可以適當增加細節，以使行文連貫。

參考詞匯：微弱的dim

Statistics show that 80% of senior high school students are near-sighted. So it is important for us to how know to protect our eyesight. Here is some advice：

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【答案】

Statistics_show_that_80%_of_senior_high_school_students_are_near?sighted.So_it_is_important_for_us_to_know_how_to_protect_our_eyesight.Here_is_some_advice：

Firstly，we should not use our eyes continuously for long periods. After reading for an hour or so，we should rest our eyes by looking at something distant. Secondly，we should not keep our book close to our eyes when reading it. We should also keep in mind not to read in the sun or in dim light，not to read in bed or in a moving bus. Besides，doing eye exercises regularly will help us keep good eyesight. Last but not least，we had better get our eyes checked at least every two years in order to find eyes’ problems immediately.

As the saying goes，“The eyes are the window of the soul.”Let’s take action to protect our eyes.

【解析】

本文的話題也是考生很熟悉的保護眼睛，有很強的可寫性，文章的要點也基本上都給出來了，一共四個要點，考生只需要翻譯即可，同時也可以做適當的發揮。在寫作的過程中，要注意使用高級詞匯和高級句型，如：keep in mind， get our eyes checked讓文章更有文采。同時在列舉措施的時候要使用合適的連接詞如：firstly,secondly,Besides， Last but not least，等，讓文章看起來很有條理，也很流暢。本篇文章在寫作時不要啰嗦，力求簡潔的表達自己的觀點。