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書面表達 （滿分30分）
高三的學生大部分都將步入18周歲，學校組織了成人儀式。你校高三年級擬舉行一次有關“成人”的英文演講比賽。請根據以下要點寫一篇100--120詞的演講稿。
要點：1．步入成人的心情；
2．成人儀式對你的意義；
3．如何用實際行動表達自己的長大成人。
注意：1． 可對所給要點作適當發揮；
2．演講稿中不得提及考生所在學校以及本人姓名；
開頭和結尾已經寫好，不計入總詞數。
Good afternoon, everyone! It’s a great honor to have the opportunity to share my excited feelings of being grown-up with you today．
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Good afternoon, everyone! It’s a great honor to have the opportunity to share my excited feelings of being grown-up with you today． As I stand here, words can not begin to describe what I feel． For today is a significant turning point in my eighteen years of life, a day that seems likes any other on the outside, but which marks the threshold of adulthood． Today, I am officially grown up．
Attending the formal adulthood ceremony held by our school has opened our eyes to what being grown-up really entails and what the role of a citizen in society requires of us．
Bearing in mind a sense of responsibility is the first step I will take towards the goal． Every time somebody lends out a hand, I’ll accept it with gratitude and pay it back by helping those in need． My steps may be humble, but it is they that make the wag．
This is my declaration towards adulthood． Thank you for listening．

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