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Mr. Lin:

  I’m serious ill today and can’t go to school. I’ve caught a bad cold because I swim with some of my classmates yesterday. This morning I had a headache . After take my temperature, my mother found that I had light fever. So she took me to see a doctor. The doctor said whether I had caught a bad cold and advised me to stay in the bed for several other days. So I am writing to ask about a sick leave of three days. As for the lesson to be missed during the absence, I will do the best to make them as fast as I get back to school .

                                    Yours: Wang ming

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Mr. Lin:

  I’m serious ill today and can’t go to school. I’ve caught a bad cold because I swim with some

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 of my classmates yesterday. This morning I had a headache . After take my temperature, my

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mother found that I had light fever. So she took me to see a doctor. The doctor said whether I

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had caught a bad cold and advised me to stay in the bed for several other days. So I am writing

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to ask about a sick leave of three days. As for the lesson to be missed during the absence, I will

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do the best to make them as fast as I get back to school .

                       soon               

                                    Yours: Wang ming