Question

書面表達

目前，學校存在少數學生考試作弊現象。某英文雜志社擬對此現象向中學生征文，標題是“My Opinion on Cheating in Examinations”。請根據下列提示用英語寫一篇征文稿。

主要原因	考試偏多、偏難
不用功、懶惰
取悅父母、老師
個人看法	作弊不對，違反校規
要誠實，努力學習
…（其他看法）

注意：1．短文必須包括所有內容要點，可適當發揮；

2．短文標題與開頭已為你寫好，不計入總詞數；

3．詞數：120左右。 

4．參考詞匯：作弊 cheat（v.），取悅please（v.）

My Opinion on Cheating in Examinations

It is known to us all that some students cheat in examinations at school.

                                                        

                                                        

 

Answer 1

【答案】

不唯一

It is known to us all that some students cheat in examinations at school.

As students, we often take examinations at school, but sometimes we have too many examinations which are too difficult for us. On the other hand, some of us are lazy and don’t work hard at their lessons. So when taking examinations, they sometimes cheat in order to get better results to please their parents and teachers.

In my opinion, it is wrong to cheat in examinations because it breaks the rules of schools. We students should be honest and try to get good results by studying hard instead of cheating in examinations. What’s more, we should improve our study methods and get well prepared for examinations.

【解析】

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