Question

假如你是高一學(xué)生李華，最近你的初中同學(xué)張明進(jìn)入高中后不適應(yīng)高中生活，情緒低落，喪失信心。請(qǐng)你根據(jù)提示給他寫(xiě)一封e-mail，鼓勵(lì)他努力學(xué)習(xí)，合理安排高中生活。
內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)如下：
● 確定學(xué)習(xí)目標(biāo)
● 改進(jìn)學(xué)習(xí)方法
● 學(xué)會(huì)獨(dú)立生活
● 參加課外活動(dòng)
● 處理好同學(xué)關(guān)系
注意：1. 詞數(shù)100左右；
2. 開(kāi)頭和結(jié)尾已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)；
3. 可適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)。
Dear Zhang Ming，
I’m sorry to hear that                                                           
　　　　　                    
Yours,
Li Hua   

Answer 1

 
Dear Zhang Ming
I’m sorry to hear that you are in a bad mood and almost lose your heart because you are not able to adapt to life in senior high. Don’t worry. The following are my suggestions.
First, it is important to set new goals in your study at the beginning of you school year. Besides, your learning method should be impoved. In addition, it is necessary to learn to live on your own and get along with your classmates. In your spare time, you’d better take an active part in various after-school activities.
I firmly hope I can be of some help to you and I believe you can make progress step by step.
Yours
LiHua

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