Question

為了調(diào)動(dòng)同學(xué)們學(xué)習(xí)英語(yǔ)的積極性，提高學(xué)習(xí)效率，近期你們班打算進(jìn)行一次班會(huì)，討論本班英語(yǔ)學(xué)習(xí)的情況以及如何學(xué)好英語(yǔ)。請(qǐng)你根據(jù)下面內(nèi)容寫(xiě)一篇英語(yǔ)發(fā)言稿：
一、英語(yǔ)學(xué)習(xí)的重要性；
二、現(xiàn)狀：部分學(xué)生學(xué)英語(yǔ)困難很大, 有的學(xué)生失去信心，甚至放棄；
三、建議：
(1)早、晚朗讀英語(yǔ)單詞、課文；
(2)背誦有用句型、名篇；
(3)課后多閱讀英語(yǔ)書(shū)報(bào)和雜志。
Dear friends, 
I would like to share my opinions on English learning with you here.
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I hope you will find my advice useful. That’s all. Thank you!

Answer 1

Dear friends, 
I would like to share my opinions on English learning with you here. It is known that learning English well is of great help in our modern society. However, quite a few students have so much trouble in learning English that they gradually lose heart in the language and some even have given it up. In my opinion, we students should make good use of every morning and evening, reading English words and texts as loudly as possible. Besides, it’s necessary for us to recite useful sentences or famous passages. Last but not least, we had better read more English books, newspapers and magazines after class because the more we read, the better our English will be.
I hope you will find my advice useful. That’s all. Thank you!

解析試題分析：考查提綱類(lèi)作文的寫(xiě)作。文章內(nèi)容比較簡(jiǎn)單，討論本班英語(yǔ)學(xué)習(xí)的情況以及如何學(xué)好英語(yǔ)，要點(diǎn)都已經(jīng)給出，考點(diǎn)只需要翻譯即可，在寫(xiě)作的時(shí)候一定要使用合適的連接詞來(lái)連接全文，讓文章成為一個(gè)整體，同時(shí)要注意使用高級(jí)的詞匯等結(jié)構(gòu)，也要使用倒裝句，強(qiáng)調(diào)句等特殊的句式來(lái)提高文章的多樣性。
考點(diǎn)：考查提綱類(lèi)作文的寫(xiě)作
點(diǎn)評(píng)：本文屬于提綱類(lèi)作文，提綱類(lèi)作文雖然好寫(xiě)，但是要寫(xiě)出特色是很不容易的。關(guān)鍵是要點(diǎn)要全面覆蓋，不能有遺漏和省略。寫(xiě)作的時(shí)候運(yùn)用多種表達(dá)方式，讓句子有變化，如果可能最好運(yùn)用諺語(yǔ)來(lái)提升文章的層次。