Question

隨著高考的臨近，部分住校生要求搬出學生宿舍，在學校附近租房子住。請你根據(jù)下表提供的內(nèi)容，寫一篇英語短文，闡述學生和家長的觀點，并表達自己的看法。

現(xiàn)象 觀點	高三部分住校生搬離學生宿舍，在學校附近租房住
多數(shù)學生	1．宿舍吵鬧，影響學習和休息； 2．熄燈制度限制了學習時間。
許多家長	1．提供好的學習環(huán)境； 2．方便照顧飲食起居。
你的看法	……

注意：1．陳述所有要點，可適當發(fā)揮，不要簡單翻譯；

2．詞數(shù)100-120；

3．開頭已給出，但不計入總詞數(shù)。

參考詞匯：熄燈制度blackout rule

With the College Entrance Examinations approaching day by day，some senior three students are moving out from their dorms and living in rented apartments near their schools．

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Answer 1

【答案】

With the College Entrance Examinations approaching day by day，some senior three students are moving out from their dorms and living in rented apartments near their schools．

Most students think although school dorms bring them fun and friendship，the blackout rule to guarantee students sleeping hours doesn’t leave them enough time to finish their homework．Worse still，the noise in the dorms not only influences their studies but also ruins their rest．To many parents, they’d like to provide a better environment for their children so that they  can study more efficiently．Besides，they can take care of their children’s daily meals and laundry，so their children can eat better and have a comfortable life．

In my opinion，whether a student should rent a house outside his school depends on his need．I am in favor of renting a house for the sake of study．After all，time is pressing．But I strongly recommend that parents should care much about their children while they are outside school．

【解析】

試題分析：本為屬于考生很熟悉的正反觀點類的議論文，要點基本上都給了出來，考生只需要把要點翻譯成英文即可，難度在于選擇合適的詞匯和句型表達出所需要的語義。在寫作的時候要選擇自己能夠運用的句型靈活表達，不要總是使用陳述句，可以變換著使用倒裝句，強調(diào)句等讓文章充滿變化。

考點：考查正反觀點的議論文

點評：本文屬于正反觀點的議論文，話題與學生的生活息息相關(guān)，考生有話可說。難度在于表達的準確性和合理性。要運用合適的連接詞如worse still , after all等把要點連接成段落，讓文章成為一個整體。