Question

書面表達(dá)（共計10分）

根據(jù)下面漫畫寫一篇短文，敘述淘氣的孩子Tom捉弄他父親的經(jīng)過。字?jǐn)?shù)100左右。第一句話和最后一句話已給出。

下列詞語供選用：

cactus仙人掌  prickly 多刺的  switch off 關(guān)掉

Tom is a naughty boy. _____________________________________________________________

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________________________________________________. You can imagine his father’s pain, and great anger when he realized what happened!

 

Answer 1

【答案】

不唯一

Tom is a naughty boy. He likes to play tricks on others. He knows that his father needs an alarm clock to wake him up at 6:30 every morning, so one morning, he decided to play a trick on him. He got up at 6:20 and slipped into the bedroom of his parents, who were still sleeping soundly. He took away the clock from the bedside table, and put a cactus there instead. He stood beside the bed, waiting for the clock to ring. At 6:30, the clock went off and woke up his father. His father, who did not open his eyes, reached out his hand to switch off the clock. But he touched the prickly cactus and let out a loud cry of pain. You can imagine his father’s pain, and great anger when he realized what happened!

【解析】

試題分析：這種題型更能考查學(xué)生的分析問題的能力，因此深受命題者的青睞。考生應(yīng)注意認(rèn)真審題，一旦審題有所偏頗，不容易得到高分。此類作文首先要描述圖畫，然后介紹圖畫背后所反映的問題，最后聯(lián)系實(shí)際發(fā)表自己的觀點(diǎn)。

考點(diǎn)：圖畫作文。

點(diǎn)評：看圖寫作要求考生要仔細(xì)觀察所提供的圖畫，抓住圖畫所要表達(dá)的中心思想，還應(yīng)注意畫面的細(xì)節(jié)。只有宏觀與微觀相結(jié)合，才能讀懂圖意、抓住要點(diǎn)。只有深入體會畫圖者的創(chuàng)作意圖，才能了解作者在頌揚(yáng)什么，反對什么或諷刺什么。考生還應(yīng)根據(jù)題目要求和圖畫的提示，充分發(fā)揮自己的想像力，使文章充實(shí)生動。在讀圖的過程中，可以根據(jù)圖畫內(nèi)容列出寫作提綱，列出重點(diǎn)的單詞、詞組或句型，然后連句成文。在寫的過程中，要注意使圖與圖之間銜接自然，層次清楚，還應(yīng)注意圖示以外的相關(guān)信息。