Question

2．假設你是李華，以優異的成績考入了理想的大學，但由于家境原因，難以負擔學費．你的外籍教師Betty得知你的情況之后為你捐助了學費，幫你完成學業．現請你給Betty老師寫一封信，以表謝意．
內容包括：
1．Betty老師提供的捐款8000元已經收到，全家非常感謝．
2．立志要努力學習知識，取得優異成績．
3．大學畢業之后會建設家鄉，奉獻家鄉．
4．會和父母在今年暑假一起去拜訪Betty老師．
注意：
1．請使用規范英語，詞數不少于100；
2．可適當加入細節，以使內容充實、行文連貫；
3．開頭和結尾已給出，不計入總詞數．
Dear Mrs．Betty，
Thank you very much for your kindness．Dear Mrs．Betty，
Thank you very much for your kindness．I have received your letter and 8000 yuan．My family and I are very happy and grateful．
With your help，I will have no difficulty in studying at university．（高分句型一）So I have made up my mind to study hard．I'm sure I will make great progress．I'm going back to my hometown after I graduate from university and I am determined to devote myself to building my hometown．
My parents and I are going to pay a visit to you this summer holiday．（高分句型二）Thank you again for your kind help．
Best wishes．
Yours sincerely，
Lihua
Best wishes．
Yours sincerely，
Lihua．

Answer 1

分析 高分句型一：
With your help，I will have no difficulty in studying at university．在您的幫助之下，我將毫無壓力的完成我的大學學業．
高分句型二：
My parents and I are going to pay a visit to you this summer holiday．我和我的父母計劃將于今年暑假期間拜訪您．
句型一 ①with one's help 在某人的幫助之下 ②have no difficulty in doing sth，此處difficulty 為不可數名詞，沒有復數形式，做某事沒有困難
句型二 My parents and I are going to pay a visit to you this summer holiday．該句謂語部分使用了be going to do sth 將來時的一種表達方式，表明很早就計劃安排要做的事

解答 Dear Mrs．Betty，
     Thank you very much for your kindness．I have received your letter and 8000 yuan．My family and I are very happy and grateful．（說明原因）
     With your help，I will have no difficulty in studying at university．（高分句型一）So I have made up my mind to study hard．I'm sure I will make great progress．I'm going back to my hometown after I graduate from university and I am determined to devote myself to building my hometown．（表明決心）
  My parents and I are going to pay a visit to you this summer holiday．（高分句型二）Thank you again for your kind help．（再次感謝）
Best wishes．
Yours sincerely，
Lihua

點評 本書面表達為提綱類，此類作文一般規定了考生的表述思路，因此寫作時應注意表達的要點明確，觀點的表達要與其提供的文字提示或說明一致，語言簡潔明了．