Question

（2009.湖南卷）寫作（滿分25分）

假設你是某中學新老師李紅，請給你的朋友張華寫一封信，告訴他你第一天上課的情況，主要內容如下：

1. 描述一件課堂上令你印象深刻的事情；

2. 介紹你處理該事的方式；

3. 談談你的感想。

注意：

1. 詞數不少于120個；

2. 可適當發揮想象，增加細節，以使行文連貫；

3. 文中不得出現與本人及學校相關的任何真實信息。

 

Answer 1

【答案】

Dear Zhang Hua,

It’s three months since I heard from you last time. Now I want to tell you an impressive story happened on my first lesson.

On hearing the bell, students ran into the classroom as quickly as they can. But a boy, Li Ming, whose father died a month ago, was late for the class. He stood outside the classroom, silently. I smiled to him and let him came in. After a while, he cried on his desk. Then I walked to him and asked what had happened .He told me that his mother was ill and he had to take some medicine for her. At the same time, he apologized to me for his lateness. Moved by his words, I praised him for his deeds and decided to sing a song named “Mother” for the students. How time flies! Class was over before I realized it.

From the story I felt we should respect our parents and do our best to help them. Do you think so? I’m looking forward to your reply.

 

Yours truly,

Li Hong

【解析】本文屬于半開放性提綱式書信體，要點有三，選材學生熟悉，也是發生在他們身邊的故事，學生只要把握準情景和要求，使表達的內容不走題即可。