Question

假如你是高三（1）班班長李華，周二下午你們班將與高三（3）班進行一場籃球賽，原定周二下午三點的英語口語課將改為周三下午。請你代表班級給外教史密斯先生發郵件說明情況并致歉。

 

Answer 1

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Dear Mr.Smith,

How are you these days? I’m writing to tell you about a change in your oral class on Tuesday afternoon. A basketball match is being held in our school at that time. The match between our class and Class Three will be held at 3p.m. on Tuesday, the time when we usually have our English oral class. I’m sorry for the change in time. Would it be convenient for you to give the oral class at three on Wednesday instead? You are welcome to come and watch our match on the playground on Tuesday afternoon if you are free. We’d all be very glad to see you there.

I must apologise again on behalf of the whole class.

Yours,

Li Hua

【解析】：本文是應用文中常見的書信。是向外教說明改變上課的時間。在本文中首先要注意書信的格式，其次要注意務必要說明原因，和改了以后的日期。要點要全，不要有任何的遺漏。在寫作時要使用合適的連接詞讓文章更通順，更像一個整體。也要使用較高級的詞匯，如convenient等，使文章更有文采，更有檔次。