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5．假設你叫李華，是校學生會主席．學生會決定于2017年9月16日～22日舉辦第三屆藝術周，請你根據以下內容寫一份書面通知．
★參賽方式：以班級為單位
★活動內容：書法，繪畫，歌舞，樂器表演等
★評獎方式：由專家和學生組成評獎小組，根據班級總分，評出前六名；作為獎勵，前兩名將有機會代表學校參加省中學生藝術節
★報名時間：本周五之前
★如有疑問，請聯系學生會
注意：1．詞數120左右；
2．可適當增加細節，以使內容連貫；
3．參考詞匯：第三屆藝術周the Third Arts Week；省中學生藝術節the Provincial Arts Festival；書法 calligraphy； 樂器musical instruments；專家expert；短劇short plays．
NOTICE
To make our school life colorful，we have decided to hold the Third Arts Week in the lecture hall．（高分句型一）It will last seven days，from September 16th to 22nd，2017．
Our Arts Week will cover a wide range of activities，including calligraphy，drawing，short plays，playing musical instruments，as well as singing and dancing．（高分句型二）The judges will be made up of experts and students．Prizes will be given according to the total scores of the classes．We'll choose the first six classes as the winners．As a reward，the first two top winners will have the chance to attend the Provincial Arts Festival．
Each class is expected to take an active part and sign up for it before Friday．And it is hoped that all of the students will make good preparations and take the chance to show your talent．（高分句型三）For more information，please contact the Students'Union．We'll be more than glad to offer help to you．
The Students'Union．

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分析 本篇書面表達屬于提綱類作文，根據提示信息假設你叫李華，是校學生會主席．學生會決定于2017年9月16日～22日舉辦第三屆藝術周，請你根據以下內容寫一份書面通知，寫作時注意以下幾點：1、仔細閱讀有關提示，弄清試題提供的所有信息，要點包括：參賽方式：以班級為單位
★活動內容：書法，繪畫，歌舞，樂器表演等
★評獎方式：由專家和學生組成評獎小組，根據班級總分，評出前六名；作為獎勵，前兩名將有機會代表學校參加省中學生藝術節
★報名時間：本周五之前
★如有疑問，請聯系學生會
  2、提綱是文章的總體框架，要在提綱的范圍內進行分析、構思和想象．要依據提示情景或詞語，按照一定邏輯關系來寫．本文寫作時可以按照要點所給的順序寫．3、根據要表達的內容確定句子的時態、語態．4．注意使用高級詞匯和句式，以增加文章的亮點．
【亮點說明】本文結構緊湊，層次分明，而且使用了多種表達：a wide range of activities各種各樣的活動；including包括；as well as也，和；be made up of由…組成；take an active part積極參加；
   To make our school life colorful，we have decided to hold the Third Arts Week in the lecture hall．（高分句型一）
Our Arts Week will cover a wide range of activities，including calligraphy，drawing，short plays，playing musical instruments，as well as singing and dancing．（高分句型二）
And it is hoped that all of the students will make good preparations and take the chance to show your talent．（高分句型三）

解答 NOTICE
      To make our school life colorful，we have decided to hold the Third Arts Week in the lecture hall．（高分句型一）It will last seven days，from September 16th to 22nd，2017．
      Our Arts Week will cover a wide range of activities，including calligraphy，drawing，short plays，playing musical instruments，as well as singing and dancing．（高分句型二）The judges will be made up of experts and students．Prizes will be given according to the total scores of the classes．We'll choose the first six classes as the winners．As a reward，the first two top winners will have the chance to attend the Provincial Arts Festival．
       Each class is expected to take an active part and sign up for it before Friday．And it is hoped that all of the students will make good preparations and take the chance to show your talent．（高分句型三）For more information，please contact the Students'Union．We'll be more than glad to offer help to you．
                                                                                                                                                                                    The Students'Union

點評 英語寫作是一項主觀性較強的測試題．它不僅考查學生的寫作基礎而且還考查學生在寫作過程中綜合運用語言的能力．在撰寫時要注意主謂語一致，時態呼應，用詞貼切等．要提高英語寫作水平，需要兩方面的訓練：一是語言基礎方面的訓練，要有扎實的造句、翻譯等基本功，即用詞法、句法等知識造出正確無誤的句子；二是寫作知識和能力 方面的訓練以掌握寫作方面的基本方法和技巧．