Question

假如你叫李華，你的朋友Jenny來信向你詢問如何保持健康。請你給他發(fā)一封E-mail提些建議。內(nèi)容要點如下：

1. 注意合理飲食,多吃水果蔬菜；

2. 保證充足睡眠，至少8小時；

3. 堅持鍛煉身體，多參加體育運動。

注意：

1.詞數(shù)100左右；

2.可適當增添細節(jié)，以使行文連貫；

3.郵件的開頭結(jié)尾已為你寫好，不計入總詞數(shù)。

Dear Jenny,

How nice to hear from you! In your letter you asked me how to keep healthy. I would like to give you some advice.

Yours

Li Hua

Answer 1

Dear Jenny,

How nice to hear from you! In your letter you asked me how to keep healthy. I would like to give you some advice.

We know, food is of great importance to us teenagers. Since we grow very fast , we are in need of nutritious food , such as fresh vegetables, fruits, fish, meat and so on. However, I think you’d better not eat food with much sugar and fat. And you should get plenty of sleep, which is necessary for you to have at least eight hours of sleep every day. In addition, you should take physical exercise regularly. It will be beneficial to your health. Only in this way can you keep fit.

Best wishes!

Yours

Li Hua

【解析】

試題分析：這是一篇提綱類作文，我們需要用正確的英語把給出的要點表達出來。本作文中給出的要點比較具體,故需要準確表達。寫作時注意準確運用時態(tài)，上下文意思連貫，符合邏輯關系，盡量使用自己熟悉的單詞句式，同時也要注意使用高級詞匯和高級句型使文章顯得更有檔次。特別注意在選擇句式時要賦予變化。

【亮點說明】本文語言豐富，注意使用不同的表達方式。如food is of great importance to us teenagers.、which is necessary for you 、 It will be beneficial to your health.，這幾個句子使用了不同的短語表達了相似的意思。最后一句 Only in this way can you keep fit.用了一個倒裝句，同時又再次點明主題。

考點：考查提綱類作文