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20．英國Warwickshire學校將組織學生來你校交流學習中文．經安排，Tracy 住在你家．假設你是李華，請你給Tracy寫封電子郵件，介紹她來中國后的有關事宜，信的要點如下：
★表達歡迎；
★生活安排：食宿，交通；
★漢語學習：每周一至周五，每天四節課；
★課外活動：文體活動，社會 實踐活動．
要求：100字左右；可適當增加細節，使行文連貫
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Answer 1

分析 本篇書面表達屬于提綱類作文，根據提示信息英國Warwickshire學校將組織學生來你校交流學習中文．經安排，Tracy 住在你家．假設你是李華，請你給Tracy寫封電子郵件，介紹她來中國后的有關事宜，寫作時注意以下幾點：1、仔細閱讀有關提示，弄清試題提供的所有信息，明確幾個要點：表達歡迎；★生活安排：食宿，交通；★漢語學習：每周一至周五，每天四節課；★課外活動：文體活動，社會 實踐活動． 2、提綱是文章的總體框架，要在提綱的范圍內進行分析、構思和想象．要依據提示情景或詞語，按照一定邏輯關系來寫．本文寫作時可以按照要點所給的順序寫．3、根據要表達的內容確定句子的時態、語態；就本文而言應該用一般現在時態．4．注意使用高級詞匯和句式，以增加文章的亮點．
【亮點說明】本文結構緊湊，層次分明，而且使用了多種表達：be delighted to 高興地去做；arrange for為…安排；As to 至于，關于；including包含，包括； In addition另外，places of interest名勝古跡；Look forward to盼望；
Now let me tell you what has been arranged for you．（高分句型一）
As to Chinese learning，you will attend four classes each day，Monday through Friday，including Oral Chinese，Listening，Reading and Writing．（高分句型二）
Also，I can show you around and take you to some places of interest．（高分句型三）

解答 Dear Tracy，
       I'm Li Hua．I'm very delighted to learn that you're coming to stay with my family while you're in my school．
       Now let me tell you what has been arranged for you．（高分句型一）During your stay here，we'll provide you with a room of your own with furniture，a TV and a bathroom．Our school is three blocks from my home，so we can cycle to school every day．Lunch is served at the school canteen．A wide variety of Chinese food is to cater to your taste．As to Chinese learning，you will attend four classes each day，Monday through Friday，including Oral Chinese，Listening，Reading and Writing．（高分句型二）
       In addition，you will enjoy colorful school activities in the afternoon．You can then join other students in playing ball games or swimming．Also，I can show you around and take you to some places of interest．（高分句型三）If you have further questions，do let me know．Looking forward to your reply．
      Best wishes．
                                                                                                                                                                                                                                  Yours，
                                                                                                                                                                                                                                   Li Hua

點評 英語寫作是一項主觀性較強的測試題．它不僅考查學生的寫作基礎而且還考查學生在寫作過程中綜合運用語言的能力．在撰寫時要注意主謂語一致，時態呼應，用詞貼切等．要提高英語寫作水平，需要兩方面的訓練：一是語言基礎方面的訓練，要有扎實的造句、翻譯等基本功，即用詞法、句法等知識造出正確無誤的句子；二是寫作知識和能力 方面的訓練以掌握寫作方面的基本方法和技巧．