Question

目前，有些家長為了能讓孩子早日成才，不顧孩子的喜好，往往把自己的興趣強加給孩子，強迫孩子去學這個、學那個，結果事與愿違。結合你身邊的事例，以“Dream and Reality”為題寫一篇短文，談談你對培養孩子成才的看法。

注意：

1．標題及開頭已寫好，不計入總詞數；

2．文中不能出現考生的具體信息；

3．詞數要求120左右。

Dream and Reality

Nowadays, there is an increasing tendency for parents to design the future for their children…….

                                                                         

                                                                         

                                                                         

 

Answer 1

【答案】

Dream and Reality

Nowadays, there is an increasing tendency for parents to design the future for their children. Regardless of the children’s interest, some parents want them to attend all kinds of other classes, laying a heavy burden on their shoulders. As a result, the children almost have no time to play.

A typical case is my neighbor Mr. and Mrs. Wang. They want their child to be an artist. They choose a music class on Saturday and a painting on Sunday for the child. In fact, the child has no interest at all. The child is kept busy all day. After a few years their efforts are in vain.

I think parents should let their children develop their talent by their own choice and interests and give them enough time and space to learn what they want to. Children should be encouraged to get close to nature. We should help children turn their dream of enjoying the beauty of nature into reality. Only in this way can children have a happy and enjoyable life.

【解析】這是一篇現象評論類文章，內容貼近生活，具有時代性，可寫性和思想性，要求學生就所給現象，進行描述，分析這個種現象的原因，并表達個人的看法，考生要根據自己的生活和學習經驗，適當增加細節，同時使用高級詞匯和句型，增加文章句型的多樣化，恰當使用連接詞，增加文章的連貫性。