Question

請根據(jù)下表的提示，寫一篇題為“Living in the City”的文章，介紹一下城市生活的利和弊。

利	弊
找工作容易	生活消費(fèi)高
交通便利	人口多，擁擠
有公園、飯店等休閑場所	空氣污染嚴(yán)重，居住環(huán)境差

 

注意：1. 不要逐詞翻譯，可適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫；

2. 詞數(shù)100左右，開頭已給出, 不計入總詞數(shù)。

參考詞匯：便利的convenient.

Living in the City

Living in the city has both advantages and disadvantages. ________________________

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Answer 1

Living in the City

Living in the city has both advantages and disadvantages. It is often easier to find work in the city. The traffic there is very convenient. Besides, there are a lot of interesting things to do and places to go. You can eat in good restaurants, visit museums, watch movies and go to parks whenever you want to relax.

However, the cost of living in the city is often very high. You have to find a well-paid job, or you will not be able to afford the things you want to do. What’s more, the city is always crowded, noisy and dirty. It is very difficult to find a good place where people can enjoy both peace and fresh air as in the countryside.

【解析】

試題分析：題目要求根據(jù)所給提示寫一篇題為“Living in the City”的短文，介紹一下城市生活的利與弊。作文必須包含表格里的所有信息，保持語意的連貫，不能逐詞翻譯；注意使用連接詞，使作文顯得通順、連貫；詞數(shù)在100詞左右，開頭不計入總詞數(shù)；注意使用上參考詞匯；作文可以分兩部分來寫，第一部分寫城市生活的便利之處；第二部分寫城市生活存在的弊端。

亮點(diǎn)說明：

范文使用了非謂語動詞Living in the city...；讓步狀語從句whenever you want to relax；定語從句you want to do，where people can enjoy both peace and fresh air等語法知識，使作文句式多樣，表達(dá)更生動、形象；

范文使用Besides, However, or, What’s more等來銜接前后句和前后段，使作文語意連貫、銜接緊湊。

考點(diǎn)：材料類作文