Question

下面是一段文章，請你對其進行修改。文中共有10處錯誤，每句中最多有兩處。錯誤涉及一個單詞的增加、刪除或修改。

增加：在缺詞處加一個漏詞符號（∧），并在此符號下面寫出該加的詞。

刪除：把多余的詞用斜線（\）劃掉。

修改：在錯的詞下劃一橫線，并在該詞下面寫出修改后的詞。

注意：    1．每處錯誤及其修改均僅限一詞；

2．只允許修改10處，多者（從第11處起）不計分。

Last Sunday we went to see a AIDS patient in hospital. We bought her some flower and fruit. She was glad to see us. Many people began to avoid see her after she was infected to HIV virus. A doctor told us that the HIV virus mustn’t be infected through daily communication and that those who suffering from AIDS shouldn’t be looked down. We had a talk with the woman and gave her some CDs as gifts. She was moved to tears and promise to be optimistic and confident in overcoming the disease. We promised to see her again before left. In my opinion, the world will become more beautiful if all of us love each other and help those in the trouble.

Answer 1

Last Sunday we went to see a (an) AIDS patient in hospital. We bought her some flower (flowers) and fruit. She was glad to see us. Many people began to avoid see (seeing) her after she was infected to (with) HIV virus. A doctor told us that the HIV virus mustn’t (couldn’t) be infected through daily communication and that those who (-who / +are) suffering from AIDS shouldn’t be looked down (upon). We had a talk with the woman and gave her some CDs as gifts. She was moved to tears and promise (promised) to be optimistic and confident in overcoming the disease. We promised to see her again before left (leaving). In my opinion, the world will become more beautiful if all of us love each other and help those in the (- the) trouble.