Question

假設英語課上老師要求同桌之間交換修改作文, 請你修改你同桌寫的以下作文。文中

共有10處語言錯誤，每句中最多有兩處錯誤。錯誤涉及一個單詞的增加、刪除或修改。

?? 增加：在缺詞處加一個漏字符號（∧）, 并在其下面寫出該加的詞。

?? 刪除：把多余的詞用斜線（＼）劃掉。

?? 修改：在錯的詞下劃一橫線，并在該詞下面寫出修改后的詞。

?? 注意：

?? 1. 每處錯誤及其修改均僅限一詞；

?? 2. 只允許修改10處，多者（從第11處起）不計分。

I still remember my middle school life in Zhengzhou. I was then in school for student from Tibet. As we were all left home of an early age, we met lots of problems in our daily life. We had to do the washing, cleaning and shopping by us. However, we seldom felt lonely or helplessly. We enjoyed our happy life. At weekends, we will play basketball on the playground, swimming in the pool or go for a picnic in the park. We were living in a big family. We treat each other as brothers and sisters. It has been three years when we graduated, but those memories are as sweet as ever before.

 

Answer 1

【答案】

1.in后加a/the

2.student→students?

3.去掉were

4.of→at/from

5.us→ourselves

6.helplessly - helpless

7.will –would/could

8.swimming –swim

9.treat→treated

10.when→since

【解析】

試題分析：

1.句意：那時，我在一所為來自西藏的學生辦的學校就讀，表示“一所”，所以in后加a/the。

2.學校有很多學生，所以student→students。

3.句意：因為在我們很小的時候就離開家了。不用被動語態，所以去掉were。

4.at an early age是固定用法，意思是在很小的時候，所以of→at/from。

5.句意：我們不得不自己洗衣服，打掃衛生和購物。所以應該用反身代詞。

6.系動詞feel之后，用形容詞作表語。

7.表示過去發生的事，故用一般過去時。

8.情態動詞之后，用動詞原形。

9.表示過去發生的事，故用一般過去時。

10.句意：從我們畢業到現在有三年了。表示“自從”，所以when→since。

考點：考查短文改錯