Question

假如你是李華，對今年一月出現的嚴重霧霾記憶猶新，認為綠色生活方式對于改善空氣質量十分有益。請根據下列要點寫一篇短文，向校刊“英語角”欄目投稿。

簡述霧霾情況	倡導綠色生活
持續三周左右 影響全國多地 造成極大不便	乘坐公交出行 節約水電紙張 … …

 
注意：1．詞數：120左右； 2．可適當增加細節，以使行文連貫。　
Greener Life Cleaner Air
It is not easy to forget the heavy smog that occurred on January.___________________
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Answer 1

One possible version:
Greener Life, Cleaner Air
It is not easy to forget the heavy smog that occurred last January. It lasted for about three weeks and affected many areas in China, causing much inconvenience and even harm to our life and health.
The incident warned us to take actions to fight for clean air before it’s too late! And I believe a green lifestyle can make a big difference to the air quality! Firstly, it’s good to take buses or other means of public transportation rather than cars whenever possible. What’s more, be aware to save water, electricity and paper. Moreover, recycle whatever we can. Last but not the least, don’t forget to influence those around you to follow!

試題分析：考查表格類作文的寫作。根據表格要點簡述霧霾情況，并倡導綠色生活，具體信息是以表格的形式給出，考點只需要適當串聯即可，在寫作的時候一定要使用合適的連接詞來連接全文，讓文章成為一個整體，同時要注意使用英語句型，也要使用倒裝句，定語從句等特殊的句式來提高文章的多樣性。象范文的句子：it’s good to take buses or other means of public transportation rather than cars whenever possible.就使用了it做形式主語，還有狀語從句的省略，還要用適當的關聯詞把句與句連起來，如：firstly;what’s more；last but not least等等。
點評：本文屬于表格類作文，此類作文雖然好寫，但是要寫出特色是很不容易的。關鍵是要點要全面覆蓋，不能有遺漏和省略。寫作的時候運用多種表達方式，讓句子有變化。