Question

假如你叫李華，明年六月份將從川大附中畢業，打算到美國加州大學上學。現在請你根據下表的個人信息，用英語寫一封信，申請留學并索要申請材料。

姓名：李華	性別：男	出生年月：1994年5月
畢業學校：川大附中	學業：各門功課優秀
申請院校：美國加州大學	申請專業：計算機科學
興趣愛好：網絡和英語	電子郵箱：lihua91@sina.com

注意：1. 信件必須包括以上內容，不要逐句翻譯，可適當增加細節以使行文連貫；
2. 詞數：100個左右。開頭和結尾已給出，不計入總詞數。
參考詞匯：加州大學：The University of California
Dear Sir or Madam,
I’m writing in the hope that I can obtain a chance to further my study in computer science
in your university. _____________________________________________________________

Answer 1

Dear Sir or Madam,
I’m writing in the hope that I can obtain a chance to further my study in computer science in your university.
First, please allow me to make a brief introduction of myself. I’m Li Hua, a boy born in May, 1994. I’m graduating from the Middle School Attached to Sichuan University next June. I’m an all-A student with a keen interest in the computer and the Internet. Besides, I’m good at English. I know that The University of California is ranked among the most famous universities in the USA, and that’s the very reason why I’m now applying to further my university study in your Computer Science Department.
I would appreciate it if you could take the trouble to provide me with some information and send me the necessary application materials. By the way, my email address is Llihua91@sina.com.
Looking forward to your reply.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua 

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