Question

假如你是李華，你的英國筆友Bill來信詢問你家鄉是否有霧霾（smog）天氣，情況如何。請按下面提示寫一封電子郵件：
1、感謝他的關心；
2、簡要介紹本地霧霾情況及給人們生活帶來的危害；
3、人們已認識到霧霾天氣的危害，正采取各種舉措減少其發生。
注意：1、字數150左中；2、開頭結尾已經給出，不計入文字總數。
                                                                                   

Answer 1

Dear Bill,
I’ m glad to receive your letter, thank you for your caring for the weather and my health. Now I’d like to tell you something about the smog.
Since the winter last year, the smog has occurred a lot of times. it has done great harm to our daily life. A great number of people have to stay at home for fear of the poisonous air caused by the smog. Smog –related disease get more and more people to hospital. What’s worse , many traffic accidents happened and many flights have to be put off.
Fortunately, people have realized the great harm caused by the smog and the importance of protecting the environment..Effective measures are being taken to reduce the smog weather. People are supposed not to go to work by car.
According to me, I will go to school by bike or on foot, I will tell whoever I meet to protect the environment as possible as they can. Would you like to tell me some good ideas? I’m looking forward to your reply.
Yours Sincerely,
Li Hua

試題分析：考查提綱式作文：以李華的名義給你的英國筆友Bill寫信介紹霧霾（smog）天氣的情況，考生首先要認真閱讀前面的提示，認清寫作要求和提綱之間的關系，這篇文章的提綱很詳細，根據所給提綱，以此為基礎充分發揮自己的想象力，靈活運用英語知識，采用不同的表達方式將各要點完整地表述出來，注意主次分明，詳略得當。語言力求準確、簡潔。根據情景的發展，按順序安排好材料。同時應選用合適的連接詞或過渡詞，使文章具有一定的連貫性。考生必須認真查驗是否有漏寫情況，有無拼寫錯誤及標點誤用等
【亮點說明】范文用了一些常見的短語：do great harm to“對…造成傷害”， for fear of “唯恐，害怕”，put off“推遲”，be supposed not to do不應該做…，looking forward to“渴望”， 還有一些語法知識和句型：a great number of people have to stay at home for fear of the poisonous air caused by the smog. 這句話用過去分詞做定語， Fortunately,People have realized the great harm caused by the smog and the importance of protecting the environment.這句話用動名詞做賓語，.Effective measures are being taken to reduce the smog weather. 這句話用了現在進行時的被動語態， I will go to school by bike or on foot, I will tell whoever I meet to protect the environment as possible as they can.這句話用了whoever引導的賓語從句，還有范文用了What’s worse , According to me,這樣的關聯詞使文章更加連貫。