Question

假定英語課上老師要求同桌之間交換修改作文，請你修改你同桌寫的以下作文。文中共有10處語言錯誤，每句中最多有兩處。每處錯誤僅涉及一個單詞的增加、刪除或修改。

增加：在缺詞處加一個漏字符號（∧），并在其下面寫出該加的詞。

刪除：把多余的詞用斜線（＼）劃掉。

修改：在錯的詞下劃—橫線，并在該詞下面寫出修改后的詞。

注意：1．每處錯誤及其修改均僅限一詞；

2．只允許修改10處，多者（從第11處起）不計分。

There is a proverb that went “Honesty is the best policy”. I still remember the day that I was left alone at home. I broke a vase by chances, which was quite treasured by my father. When he came back, I was too fearful that I didn’t tell the truth. The cat was his excuse. My father said nothing, and I could read his distrust. The next morning, after a restless night, I admitted to my father that it was my fault. I saw relief in his eyes. He smiled at me. From now on, I never told lies. My honesty won me great trust from others, which benefited from my growth a lot. It is the “crack” that is reminding me all the time that I have long way to go. With the light through the crack I can see the road ahead clear.

 

Answer 1

【答案】

 

 went →goes

 that→when    

 chances→chance

 too→so

 his→my

 and→but

 now →then

 benefited from→去掉from

 have∧ long way→a

 clear→clearly

【解析】

試題分析：本文敘述了作者有一次不小心打壞了父親珍愛的花瓶，一開始作者說是小貓打壞的，他感覺父親不相信，第二天早上，作者承認那是自己的過錯，作者看到了父親眼中的安慰。從此，作者再也不撒謊。而且作者的誠實贏得了別人的信任，對作者的成長受益匪淺。

 考查動詞。這里that引導的定語從句，它在從句中作主語，既然是諺語，所以是一般現(xiàn)在時，所以用goes。

 考查定語從句。這里day是先行詞，when在從句中作狀語，that不能作狀語，故用when。

 考查名詞。這里是固定短語by chance偶然，意外 。

 考查連詞。這里是so…that如此……以致于。他是如此地害怕以致于我不能告訴實情。

 考查代詞。貓只是我的借口，根據(jù)上下文可知應該用my。

 考查連詞。and表示前后是并列關系；but表示前后是轉(zhuǎn)折關系。

 考查固定短語。From now on 從現(xiàn)在起；From then on從那時起。根據(jù)上文可知從那時起，我再也沒有撒過謊。

 考查固定短語。benefited from從……中受益；benefit sth使什么受益。我的誠實從其他人那里贏得了信任，這有益于我以后的成長，故去掉from。

 考查固定短語。這次的錯誤一直提醒我我有很長的路要走。這里是固定短語have a long way有很長的路。

 考查副詞。clear是形容詞，clearly是副詞，這里用副詞來修飾動詞。

考點：短文改錯。