Question

假如你叫李華，剛剛升入高中，你在學(xué)習(xí)英語(yǔ)的過(guò)程中遇到一些問(wèn)題，想得到老師的幫助，并想給班級(jí)的英語(yǔ)老師提一些建議，以幫助自己學(xué)好英語(yǔ)。下面表格中只給了簡(jiǎn)單的提示，請(qǐng)你結(jié)合自己的實(shí)際情況給英語(yǔ)老師寫一封求助信，內(nèi)容如下：

學(xué)習(xí)英語(yǔ)時(shí)遇到的問(wèn)題	1.生詞多，記憶有難度 2....
向英語(yǔ)老師提出的建議	1.介紹一些學(xué)習(xí)英語(yǔ)的好方法 2....

字?jǐn)?shù)：100左右。信的開(kāi)頭和結(jié)尾已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。
Dear teacher,
My name is Li Hua. I’m writing a letter to you to ask for some help.                                 
                                                                    
                                                                    
Yours.
Li Hua

Answer 1

Dear teacher,
My name is Li Hua. I’m writing a letter to you to ask for some help. I have met many difficulties in learning English. First, I find our texts full of new words that are very difficult for me to remember. Besides, the texts are too long for me to recite. What’s more, grammar is also very difficult to learn.
Faced with so many difficulties, I have to ask you for some help. Would you like to introduce to us some good ways to learn new words so that we can remember them more easily？ In the meanwhile, I beg you to teach the text more slowly so that the average students can easily follow you. Also, I would like you to introduce some rules and good ways to learn grammar. I’m sure that I can make great progress in my English study with your help.
Yours.
Li Hua

解析試題分析：本文屬于提綱類作文，話題是關(guān)于自己在學(xué)習(xí)英語(yǔ)時(shí)所遇見(jiàn)的困難向老師說(shuō)明并求助。文章的要點(diǎn)基本上都給了出來(lái)，考生需要翻譯成英語(yǔ)。靈活變化表達(dá)，適度進(jìn)行改寫。在寫作的時(shí)候使用高級(jí)的詞匯和各種句型，讓文章充滿變化。在發(fā)表個(gè)人觀點(diǎn)的時(shí)候，盡量使用諺語(yǔ)來(lái)提高文章的檔次。
考點(diǎn)：考查提綱類短文寫作
點(diǎn)評(píng)：提綱類短文寫作的關(guān)鍵在于要把所有的要點(diǎn)都包括在內(nèi)，不能有遺漏。要靈活運(yùn)用多種句式，讓文章充滿變化，注意語(yǔ)法規(guī)則的使用，使用高級(jí)的句型或者詞匯要與個(gè)人的能力相結(jié)合，盡量不要出錯(cuò)。