Question

近幾年，全球變暖越來越受到關注，越來越多的人為組織全球變暖做出貢獻，因此一種新的生活方式誕生了——低碳生活。請就Low Carbon Life寫一篇英語短文，要求涵蓋以下要點：

1. 不需要用電和水的時候，記得把它們關掉。

2. 外出時，盡可能步行、騎自行車或乘坐公共交通工具。

3. 請使用節能產品。

字數：100-110

                                                                              

 

Answer 1

【答案】

In recent years, the attention to global warming has been increasing. More and more people make contributions to prevent it from going worse. At the same time, a new low-carbon lifestyle emerges.

What can we do to achieve low carbon? First, remember to turn off lights and water taps when you do not use them. Second, when going out, take public transports, ride a bike or walk as much as possible to reduce carbon emission. Third, use the energy-saving products.

Besides of these, there are many other ways we can employ to live a low carbon life. If everyone maintains/ adheres to the lifestyle, it will make a huge change to the current situation and our home will become much more beautiful.

【解析】

試題分析：這是一篇提綱類作文，我們需要用正確的英語把給出的要點表達出來.本作文中給出的要點比較具體,故需要準確表達.寫作時注意準確運用時態，上下文意思連貫，符合邏輯關系，盡量使用自己熟悉的單詞句式，同時也要注意使用高級詞匯和高級句型使文章顯得更有檔次。特別注意在選擇句式時要賦予變化。

考點：提綱類作文

點評：本文屬于提綱類作文，動筆前，一定要認真分析要點，理解要點要表達的含義，不能遺漏要點，跑題偏題。平時除了加強詞匯積累，寫作聯系以外，還可以適當記憶一些類似的范文，這樣在考試中可以起到事半功倍的效果。