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10．假設你是紅星中學高三（1）班學生李華，班里一名高一高二時一直學習很優秀的學生王毅，在進入高三時考試成績不佳，感到很苦惱．請根據下列要點用英語給他寫封信：
1．幫他分析原因
2．給他提出建議
3．陳述你幫助他的具體打算
注意：詞數100左右．開頭、結尾已經給出，不計入總字數．
Dear Wang Yi，
I'm sorry to learn your present condition．
In my memory，you were excellent in Senior 1 and Senior 2．However，when you enter Senior 3，you haven't got good marks．In my opinion，something must be wrong with your method of studies．In addition，you are experiencing too much pressure，which does great harm to you．（高分句型一）Therefore，you should change a bit．First，you should follow the teachers，and understand all they have taught in class．Second，you should make your own plan，and improve yourself bit by bit．Third，you should learn to relax．For example，you can walk，chat after class，or play table tennis sometimes．If you are willing to talk to me，you can call me or send me an email．（高分句型二） Hope you will get used to the new life and have your grades improved soon．（高分句型三）
Best regards．
Yours，
Li Hua．

Answer 1

分析 本篇書面表達屬于提綱類作文，根據提示信息假設你是紅星中學高三（1）班學生李華，班里一名高一高二時一直學習很優秀的學生王毅，在進入高三時考試成績不佳，感到很苦惱．請根據下列要點用英語給他寫封信，寫作時注意以下幾點：1、仔細閱讀有關提示，弄清試題提供的所有信息，要點包括：幫他分析原因；給他提出建議；陳述你幫助他的具體打算2、提綱是文章的總體框架，要在提綱的范圍內進行分析、構思和想象．要依據提示情景或詞語，按照一定邏輯關系來寫．本文寫作時可以按照要點所給的順序寫．3、根據要表達的內容確定句子的時態、語態．4．注意使用高級詞匯和句式，以增加文章的亮點．
【亮點說明】本文結構緊湊，層次分明，而且使用了多種表達：In my memory在我的記憶中；However然而；In my opinion，以我的觀點來看；In addition另外；do great harm to 對…有害；Therefore因此；get used to適應；
In addition，you are experiencing too much pressure，which does great harm to you．（高分句型一）
If you are willing to talk to me，you can call me or send me an email．（高分句型二）
Hope you will get used to the new life and have your grades improved soon．（高分句型三）

解答 Dear Wang Yi，
       I'm  sorry to learn your present condition．In my memory，you were excellent in Senior 1 and Senior 2．However，when you enter Senior 3，you haven't got good marks．In my opinion，something must be wrong with your method of studies．In addition，you are experiencing too much pressure，which does great harm to you．（高分句型一）Therefore，you should change a bit．First，you should follow the teachers，and understand all they have taught in class．Second，you should make your own plan，and improve yourself bit by bit．Third，you should learn to relax．For example，you can walk，chat after class，or play table tennis sometimes．If you are willing to talk to me，you can call me or send me an email．（高分句型二）
       Hope you will get used to the new life and have your grades improved soon．（高分句型三）
       Best regards．
                                                                                                                                                                                                    Yours，
                                                                                                                                                                                                    Li Hua

點評 英語寫作是一項主觀性較強的測試題．它不僅考查學生的寫作基礎而且還考查學生在寫作過程中綜合運用語言的能力．在撰寫時要注意主謂語一致，時態呼應，用詞貼切等．要提高英語寫作水平，需要兩方面的訓練：一是語言基礎方面的訓練，要有扎實的造句、翻譯等基本功，即用詞法、句法等知識造出正確無誤的句子；二是寫作知識和能力 方面的訓練以掌握寫作方面的基本方法和技巧．