Question

5．情景作文
假設(shè)你是紅星中學(xué)高三一班的學(xué)生李華，為響應(yīng)綠化祖國的號召，你班四月十二日去郊區(qū)植樹，請根據(jù)以下四幅圖的先后順序，介紹植樹活動(dòng)的全過程，給某英文雜志的"綠色行動(dòng)"專欄寫一篇以"Green Action in Our Class"為題的英文稿件．
注意：詞數(shù)不少于60
提示詞：郊區(qū) suburbs

Green Action in Our Class
April 12 is memorable because our class had a meaningful experience on that day．In the morning，we bicycled to the suburbs to plant trees，talking and laughing all the way．Upon arrival，we began to work immediately．Some were digging holes．Some were carrying and planting young trees．Others were watering them．After getting the work done，we put up a board reminding people to protect the trees．Before leaving we took some photos to record our green action．Seeing the lines of trees，we all had a sense of achievement．We feel it's our duty to protect and beautify our environment．．

Answer 1

分析 本篇看圖寫作分四幅圖畫，要求考生介紹一次植樹活動(dòng)．在寫作的時(shí)候首先要觀察四張圖的內(nèi)容，按照圖片所標(biāo)出的數(shù)字理解事情發(fā)展的先后順序，以便自己能夠抓住圖片中所發(fā)生的事情和主要內(nèi)容進(jìn)行寫作．同時(shí)，考生還要注意的是在寫作過程中所運(yùn)用的時(shí)態(tài)要以一般過去時(shí)為主．除此以外，要注意寫作過程中注意使用平時(shí)學(xué)到的短語和句型，注意行文的連貫和邏輯性．
重要短語：
 put up，豎起，a sense of achievement，成就感
高分句子：
1．Upon arrival，we began to work immediately．本句中，Upon加短語加句子為重要句式，意為一…就…
2．Seeing the lines of trees，we all had a sense of achievement．本句前半句為現(xiàn)在分詞做狀語，豐富句子內(nèi)容．

解答 Green Action in Our Class
     April 12 is memorable because our class had a meaningful experience on that day．（引出下文）In the morning，we bicycled to the suburbs to plant trees，talking and laughing all the way．Upon arrival，we began to work immediately．（高分句型）Some were digging holes．Some were carrying and planting young trees．Others were watering them．After getting the work done，we put up a board reminding people to protect the trees．Before leaving we took some photos to record our green action．（描述圖片內(nèi)容）Seeing the lines of trees，we all had a sense of achievement．（高分句子）We feel it's our duty to protect and beautify our environment．（總結(jié)）

點(diǎn)評 圖畫作文就是根據(jù)給出的一幅或幾幅圖畫所提供的信息寫短文．寫好看圖作文，考生應(yīng)注意運(yùn)用熟悉的英語詞匯、句型等，運(yùn)用多樣化的句式，注意長短句的結(jié)合、簡單句和復(fù)合句的結(jié)合；還要注意上下文的銜接，過渡要自然．最后認(rèn)真檢查，查漏補(bǔ)缺．