Question

12．假設你是李華．你的筆友Jack今年暑假要來中國旅游，他聽到了一些對中國的負面宣傳，對中國之行感到擔心．請你給他發一封郵件，幫助他了解真實的中國社會．
要點如下：
1．對他的擔心表示理解；
2．介紹中國人民的優點；（善良、隨和、樂于交朋友）
3．歡迎來到中國親身體驗．（親身體驗：experience by yourselves）
注意：
1．詞數100左右，開頭和結尾已給出，不計入總詞數；
2．可以適當增加細節，以使行文連貫；
Dear Jack，
Dear Jack，
Glad to hear that you are coming to China in the coming summer vocation．It's understandable that one may feel worried before going to a totally strange country．But I'm sure you'll have a pleasant time while traveling in China．（對他的擔心表示理解）
Like any other large countries，it's unavoidable that China may have some negative sides．But honestly speaking，most Chinese are friendly，hospitable and warm-hearted．Anyone will be willing to lend a hand whenever we find someone in trouble，especially to foreigners．【高分句型一】As a result，most foreigners who come to China think highly of China's hospitability，civilization and harmony．【高分句型二】In fact，China has become one of the most attractive countries for tourists in recent years．（介紹中國人民的優點）
Seeing is believing．You won't have a better understanding of China unless you're here．I'm looking forward to your coming．（歡迎來到中國親身體驗）
Best wishes!
Yours，
Li Hua．

Answer 1

分析 這是一封介紹真實的中國社會的郵件．根據題目要求可知用第一人稱和一般現在時態．內容包括：一對他的擔心表示理解；二介紹中國人民的優點；三歡迎來到中國親身體驗．
高分句型：
1．Anyone will be willing to lend a hand whenever we find someone in trouble，especially to foreigners．句子里be willing to 表示"愿意"； lend a hand 表示"幫助"；whenever引導讓步狀語從句，表示"無論何時"； in trouble表示"處于困境"．
無論何時發現有人處于困境，特別是外國人，我們任何人都會愿意伸出援手．
2．As a result，most foreigners who come to China think highly of China's hospitability，civilization and harmony．句子里As a result表示"結果"；who引導定語從句，代指先行詞most foreigners；think highly of 表示"稱贊"．
結果，多數來到中國的外國人都稱贊中國人的熱情、文明以及和諧．

解答 Dear Jack，
    Glad to hear that you are coming to China in the coming summer vocation． It's understandable that one may feel worried before going to a totally strange country．But I'm sure you'll have a pleasant time while traveling in China．（對他的擔心表示理解）
      Like any other large countries，it's unavoidable that China may have some negative sides．But honestly speaking，most Chinese are friendly，hospitable and warm-hearted．Anyone will be willing to lend a hand whenever we find someone in trouble，especially to foreigners．【高分句型一】As a result，most foreigners who come to China think highly of China's hospitability，civilization and harmony．【高分句型二】In fact，China has become one of the most attractive countries for tourists in recent years．（介紹中國人民的優點）
      Seeing is believing．You won't have a better understanding of China unless you're here．I'm looking forward to your coming．（歡迎來到中國親身體驗）
Best wishes!
                                                       Yours
                                                       Li Hua

點評 考查提綱類作文．
我們在寫作文的時候，一般應該把亮點句型放在明顯的位置，以便于能夠吸引閱卷老師的眼球；同時對于高分句型的使用也要慎重，應該用自己有把握的句子，特別是高考時，應該以正確為首要目的．另外，長短句的搭配使用會使文章顯得靈活，不死板，是寫作的首選．