Question

下面短文中至少有10處語言錯誤。請在有錯誤的地方增加、刪除或修改某個單詞。

增加：在缺詞處加一個漏字符號（∧）, 并在其下面寫上該加的詞。

刪除：把多余的詞用斜線（＼）劃掉。

修改：在錯的詞下劃一橫線, 并在該詞下面寫上修改后的詞。

注意：

1. 每處錯誤及其修改均僅限一詞；

2. 只允許修改10處, 多者(從第11處起)不計分。

John and Tom are friends. One day, they went into forest for a trip. They were enjoying the beauty of nature when they saw a bear coming at them. All of them were very frightened. Tom ran up to a tree and climbing quickly. He did not think of John, who was not so good for tree climbing. John thought for a second .He has heard that animals do not like dead bodies. He fell to the ground but held his breath. The bear smelled him for a while and went away, thought he was dead. Tom asked John, “What did the bear whisper into your ear?” John replied, “The bear asked me not to keep away from friends like you”, and went on her way lonely.

 

Answer 1

【答案】

 加個 a

 All改為 Both

 climbing改為climbed

 for改為at

 has改為had

 but改為and

 thought改為thinking

 去掉not

 her改為his

 lonely改為 alone

【解析】

試題分析：

 在forest之前加個 a，表示泛指某個事物，用不定冠詞

 表示兩者都用“ both”，而“all”是指三者或三者以上

 and連接了兩個并列結構，and之前用的是一般過去式，故and之后也應用一般過去式

 固定短語 be good at 擅長

 整篇文章都用的是一般過去式，這里表示“曾經聽說”，過去的過去，故用過去完成時

 這里表示并列，而不是轉折，所以but改為and

 分詞的邏輯主語“The bear”和分詞動作是主動關系，故用現在分詞作原因狀語

 這里要表達熊說要遠離你這樣的朋友，keep away from 遠離

 根據上文He did not think of John,可知Tom是男的，所以her改為his

 alone只表示“獨自”的客觀狀態，lonely可表示人“孤獨的”也可表示地方“荒涼的”

考點：考查學生對詞匯語法的掌握情況

點評：答題中注意句子中人稱和數是否一致，時態是否一致。各種詞性之間的區別以及一些常用句型，固定短語的應用。一般的這類題型不會出現太復雜的單詞和句子，這類題型考查的就是我們的基礎知識。平時應注重積累，熟記一些句型及慣用結構。修改前先細讀短文，標出出錯的位置，改完以后還得細讀短文，看看改過后的短文是否語意通順，符合邏輯。