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【題目】請你用英文寫一篇短文向校英文報投稿，介紹中國科學家屠呦呦，內容主要包括：

1. 屠呦呦，女，1930年出生于浙江；

2. 因在青蒿素瘧疾治療方面的突出貢獻于2015年獲得諾貝爾生理學或醫學獎；

3. 她是第一位獲得諾貝爾科學獎項的中國籍科學家。

注意：1.詞數100左右；

2. 可以適當增加細節，以使行文連貫。

參考詞匯：青蒿素artemisinin　瘧疾malaria

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Answer 1

【答案】Chinese woman scientist Tu Youyou, who won a share of the Nobel Prize for Physiology or Medicine in 2015, was born in 1930 in Zhejiang Province. She won the prize for her amazing contribution to the development of artemisinin, a highly effective treatment for malaria.

Tu Youyou, whose drug has saved millions of lives across the globe, is the first Chinese scientist to win a Nobel Prize in the science. Her winning the prize will help traditional Chinese medicine become better accepted in other countries.

Her success proves that Rome is not built in a day, and we should stick to our dreams until they can be realised.

【解析】試題分析：本文要求用英文寫一篇短文向校英文報投稿，介紹中國科學家屠呦呦，內容主要包括：屠呦呦，女，1930年出生于浙江；因在青蒿素瘧疾治療方面的突出貢獻于2015年獲得諾貝爾生理學或醫學獎；她是第一位獲得諾貝爾科學獎項的中國籍科學家。寫作時要認真閱讀前面的提示，認清寫作要求和提綱之間的關系，然后確定文章的主題、文體、人稱和時態。根據所給要點，靈活運用英語知識，采用不同的表達方式將各要點完整地表述出來。寫作時注意時態、語態的合理運用，同時應選用合適的連接詞或過渡詞，適當增加細節，以使行文連貫。

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