Question

假設(shè)你叫李華，昨天收到了筆友David的e-mail，得知他不久要來(lái)杭州，他想了解如何學(xué)好中文。請(qǐng)你用英文給他回復(fù)一封e-mail，介紹學(xué)習(xí)中文的體會(huì)和方法，提出你的建議，以及表達(dá)你幫助他學(xué)好中文的愿望。你提出以下建議：

到中文培訓(xùn)機(jī)構(gòu)上課

多看中文節(jié)目

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注意：1.對(duì)所給要點(diǎn)，逐一陳述，適當(dāng)發(fā)揮，不要簡(jiǎn)單翻譯。

           2.詞數(shù)100左右。開(kāi)頭和結(jié)尾已經(jīng)寫好，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。

Dear David,

I’m glad to learn that you’re coming to Hangzhou.____________________________________________

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Answer 1

【答案】

 

One possible version：

  Well, there’re so many methods and I think the following suggestions will be of great help for you. Firstly, you can attend some classes to learn Chinese, where the teachers will teach you a lot. Secondly, reading Chinese books and watching Chinese TV programmes will do good to your listening and reading in Chinese. Thirdly, you can also learn some Chinese songs, which is a good way to learn Chinese well. In addition, you’d better make some Chinese friends, from whom you can learn more about Chinese language and customs. What’s more, keep reminding yourself that practice makes perfect. If you practice every day, I’m sure that your Chinese will be pretty good before long.

I’m looking forward to your coming.  

Yours, Li Hua

【解析】

試題分析：電子郵件是很常見(jiàn)的一種應(yīng)用文體裁，格式開(kāi)頭均已給出，所以寫作時(shí)只需表達(dá)清楚要點(diǎn)建議即可。對(duì)于這種建議性寫作內(nèi)容，要開(kāi)門見(jiàn)山寫出寫信的原因以及建議的內(nèi)容和提出建議的理由。在語(yǔ)言方面，要簡(jiǎn)明扼要，目的明確，而且要有合理性和說(shuō)服力。在語(yǔ)氣上一定要委婉禮貌，要顧及對(duì)方的感受。此外寫作時(shí)還要注意細(xì)節(jié)上的補(bǔ)充和連接詞的恰當(dāng)使用，以使文章行文連貫，邏輯性強(qiáng)。常用的寫作句型：I am writing to share some advice with you . I’m willing to give a hand to you .It should be a good idea for …..等。

【亮點(diǎn)說(shuō)明】文章開(kāi)門見(jiàn)山提出寫作話題和目的，然后用firstly ,secondly ,thirdly ,in addition 和what’s more 等詞匯依次羅列出作者的五條建議，這樣的寫作手法使文章層次清晰、結(jié)構(gòu)分明、讓人一目了然。而且并列句there’re so many methods and I think the following suggestions will be of great help for you.以及定語(yǔ)從句where the teachers will teach you a lot. Secondly,條件狀語(yǔ)從句 If you practice every day,等多種復(fù)合句將一些松散的信息連接起來(lái)，使句子結(jié)構(gòu)更為緊湊，同時(shí)也顯示了作者對(duì)這些高級(jí)、復(fù)雜句式的靈活掌握。

考點(diǎn)：考查提綱作文。