Question

假如你叫李明。你的好友Mark生病了，在家復(fù)習(xí)迎考。以下是學(xué)校關(guān)于期末考試的通知，請(qǐng)根據(jù)該通知寫(xiě)一份120左右的e-mail給Mark，告訴他考試的情況。

Notice on the Final Exams

時(shí)間：下周四——the last day of the exam week 內(nèi)容：五個(gè)問(wèn)題中任意回答三個(gè)；寫(xiě)作文一篇 復(fù)習(xí)范圍：課本，期中考試試卷和筆記。 計(jì)分：期末考試占55%；期中考試占25%; 研究性課程占20%。

注意：

1．開(kāi)頭已寫(xiě)好，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)；

2．生詞：研究性課程 research work  分?jǐn)?shù) grade

Dear Mark,

   It’s a pity that you can’t go over your lessons with us．_____________________________________     

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                                             Yours truly,

                                                Li Ming

Answer 1

Dear Mark,

   It’s a pity that you can’t go over your lessons with us．The final exams will be held next Thursday, which is also the last day of the exam week．What is different about the exam is that it consists of two parts, that is, answering three of the five questions and writing articles．We are supposed to go over our mid-term exam papers, textbooks and class notes to prepare for it．The grade is made up of three parts．The final exams will make up 55% of our grade, the research work 20 and the mid-term exams 25% of it．

   Please feel free to contact if you are still not clear about it．

   Hope you will recover soon and also get a satisfactory mark in the exam．

                                                                          Yours truly,

                                                                           Li Ming

解析:

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