Question

6．假設你是李華，明年將要參加高考，對于專業選擇與父母的意見各不相同，對此很困惑．請你根據一下提示，用英語給你的英國筆友David發一封郵件，談談關于你的專業選擇問題．
1父母的想法；     2 你的意愿；    3 向David尋求建議．
要求：
1 詞數100左右；可適當增加細節，以使行文連貫；
2 信的格式和開頭已給出，不計入總詞數．
Dear David，
I am at a loss nowadays because my parents have different opinions about choosing my major in college．
                                                          
Yours，
Li Hua．

Answer 1

分析 本篇書面表達屬于提綱類作文，根據提示信息明年將要參加高考，對于專業選擇與父母的意見各不相同，對此很困惑．請你根據一下提示，用英語給你的英國筆友David發一封郵件，談談關于你的專業選擇問題，寫作時注意以下幾點：1、仔細閱讀有關提示，弄清試題提供的所有信息，明確幾個要點：父母的想法；你的意愿；向David尋求建議．2、提綱是文章的總體框架，要在提綱的范圍內進行分析、構思和想象．要依據提示情景或詞語，按照一定邏輯關系來寫．本文寫作時可以按照要點所給的順序寫．3、根據要表達的內容確定句子的時態、語態；就本文而言應該用一般現在時態．4．注意使用高級詞匯和句式，以增加文章的亮點．
【亮點說明】本文結構緊湊，層次分明，而且使用了多種表達：at a loss茫然，不知所措；prepare  for為…做好準備；However然而；in great need of急需；Despite不管，不顧；be interested in對…感興趣；make full use of充分利用；
My father thinks I should major in finance for the reason that he feels it will prepare me for a career in the world of business．（高分句型一）
However，my mother suggests me choosing law as my major because she thinks that our society is in great need of skilled workers and experts in law so that I can find a good job after graduation．（高分句型二）
I know it would be a waste if I don't make full use of my talent for languages．（高分句型三）

解答 Dear David，
      I am at a loss nowadays because my parents have different opinions about choosing my major in college．
      My father thinks I should major in finance for the reason that he feels it will prepare me for a career in the world of business．（高分句型一）However，my mother suggests me choosing law as my major because she thinks that our society is in great need of skilled workers and experts in law so that I can find a good job after graduation．（高分句型二）（父母的想法）Despite their opinions，I want to learn a foreign language because languages are what I am interested in and good at．I know it would be a waste if I don't make full use of my talent for languages．（高分句型三）（自己的意愿）
     What should I do？I am looking forward to your advice．（向David尋求建議）
                                                                                                                                                                                                                   Yours，
                                                                                                                                                                                                                  Li Hua

點評 英語寫作是一項主觀性較強的測試題．它不僅考查學生的寫作基礎而且還考查學生在寫作過程中綜合運用語言的能力．在撰寫時要注意主謂語一致，時態呼應，用詞貼切等．要提高英語寫作水平，需要兩方面的訓練：一是語言基礎方面的訓練，要有扎實的造句、翻譯等基本功，即用詞法、句法等知識造出正確無誤的句子；二是寫作知識和能力 方面的訓練以掌握寫作方面的基本方法和技巧．