Question

【題目】假設你是紅星中學高三學生李華。上周爺爺過生日，請根據以下四幅圖的先后順序，寫一篇周記。記述你自制相冊作為禮物并送出的過程。

注意：詞數不少于60。

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Answer 1

【答案】Last Monday, while checking the calendar, I realized my grandpa’s birthday was approaching. What would be a good surprise gift for him this year?

While I was racking my brain for an idea, memories of the time I spent with Grandpa fishing and playing football or chess all flooded back. It suddenly hit me that I could make a photo album to record those precious moments. Without any delay, I threw myself into the creation of the album. I turned on the computer, carefully selected some photos and designed each page. Finally, an album of love was born. Looking at each photo, I couldn’t help imagining how delighted Grandpa would be.

At the birthday party, when I presented the album to Grandpa, he hugged me affectionately, tears welling up in his eyes. My parents smiled happily.

The album serves not only as a gift to show my respect and appreciation to my dear Grandpa on this special day, but reminds me that I should spend more time with him.

Last Monday, while checking the calendar, I realized my grandpa’s birthday was around the corner. What would be a good surprise gift for him this year?

While I was racking my brain for an idea, memories of the time I spent with Grandpa fishing and playing football or chess all sprang up. It occurred to me that I could make a photo album to record those precious moments.

Without any delay, I threw myself into the creation of the album. I turned on the computer, carefully selected some photos and designed each page. Finally, a hand-made album full of love insert was born. Looking at each photo, I couldn’t help imagining how delighted Grandpa would be.

At the birthday party, when I presented the album to Grandpa, he hugged me affectionately, tears welling up in his eyes. My parents smiled happily. The album serves not only as a gift to show my respect and appreciation to my dear Grandpa on this special day, but reminds me that I should spend more time with him. Just as the proverb goes, family affection does matter a lot.

【解析】

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