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【題目】假定英語課上老師要求同桌之間交換修改作文，請你修改你同桌寫的以下作文。文中共有10處語言錯誤，每句中最多有兩處。每處錯誤僅涉及一個單詞的增加、刪除或修改。

增加：在缺詞處加一個漏字符號（∧），并在其下面寫出該加的詞。

刪除：把多余的詞用斜線(＼)劃掉。

修改：在錯的詞下畫一橫線，并在該詞下面寫出修改后的詞。

注意：1. 每處錯誤及其修改均僅限一詞。

2. 只允許修改10處，多者（從第11處起）不計分。

I am more than glad to tell you about my trip in Xi’an, a capital city of Shaanxi Province.

What impresses me deep is its natural scenery and long history. First, as it is known to the world, Xi’an has a long history and is the birthplace of Chinese civilization. Its cultural and historical significance of the area, as well as many historical sites, help Xi’an enjoy the title of “Natural History Museum”. The Terracotta Warriors, as example, are praised as “the eight wonder of the world”. Second, it is in a favorable geographical location surrounding by the Wei River and Qinling. I have also climbed Mount Hua, one of the five most famous mountains in China, what is famous for its breathtaking cliffs and unique characteristics.

It is really worthy visiting, and I’m looking forward to your coming.

Answer 1

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【解析】西安，陜西省的省會，應該是特指，不能用a。

使我印象最深的是它的自然風景和悠久歷史。修飾impress 用副詞deeply。

as it is known to the world, 此句中，as引導非限定性定語從句，as 在從句中做主語，it 多余。

不但是中國文明的發源地，文化和歷史的重要意義以及很多歷史遺跡。As well as 表示也，可連接并列成分，as well 不可以。

主謂一致。此句Its cultural and historical significance of the area, as well as many historical sites, help Xi’an enjoy the title of “Natural History Museum”. 中 as well as 連接并列主語，用就前原則，所以用單數。

例如是for example。

兵馬俑被認為是世界第八大奇觀，所以要用序數詞。

此處被渭河和秦嶺包圍表被動關系，所以用過去分詞。

I have also climbed Mount Hua, one of the five most famous mountains in China, what is famous for its breathtaking cliffs and unique characteristics. 此句的后半分局為定語從句，修飾先行詞Mount Hua,從句中做主語用which ，不用what。

值得參觀用it is worth doing， 不用worthy。