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IV. 寫作（共兩節，滿分40分）
第一節基礎寫作（共1小題，滿分15分）
以下是一位學生對英國出版社英語教材的反饋意見表，請根據要求寫一篇英語短文，寄回英國出版社。

姓名	李華	聯系電話	0750--567890
學校	耀華中學	電子郵箱	Lihua2009@yahoo.com
教材評價	主要優點	話題覆蓋面廣，涉及文化、歷史、地理、科技等
	主要缺點	部分句子表達深奧；語法如定語從句在某些課文中出現過于頻繁, 顯得生硬
	建議	語法順序由淺入深，先介紹句子基本成分；再學習復合句；增加與單元話題相關的閱讀材料

【寫作要求】
1．5個句子介紹表格中對教材的評價內容。
2．將5個句子組織成連貫的短文，使用必要的連接詞。
3．頭和結尾已經給出，不計入句子數。
參考詞匯：定語從句:attributive clause       復合句: compound clause
【評分標準】句子結構準確，信息內容完整，篇章結構連貫。
Dear editors:
I am Li Hua from Class Ten Senior One of Yaohua Middle School. My opinions about the textbook are as follows:
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I hope my suggestions will be taken into consideration.
Please contact me at 0750—567890 or Lihua1995@yahoo.com
Best wishes!
Li Hua

Answer 1

One possible version：
First of all, what is good about the textbook is that it covers various subjects such as culture, history, geography and modern science and technology. But there are too many attributive clauses crowded in one passage, which does not seem natural. Besides, some of the sentences are too complicated to understand. If I could make a suggestion, I would like to say that the basic and simple sentence structures should come before the compound clauses in the aspect of grammar starting from easy level. At the same time, there should be more reading materials related to the topic of each unit.

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