Question

5．請根據以下提示，并結合事例，用英語寫一篇短文．
The best example of universally understood body language may be the smile．A smile can help us get through difficult situations and find friends in a world of strangers．A smile can open doors and tear down  walls
注意：①無須寫標題，不得照抄英語提示語；
②除詩歌外，文體不限；
③文中不得透露個人姓名和學校名稱；
④詞數為120左右．

Answer 1

分析 寫好這類作文要注意幾個步驟：1． 認真審題，找準提示語中的關鍵詞或句，確定中心思想．2． 依據關鍵句，草擬提綱，梳理文章的脈絡3． 準確定位人稱、時態．注意使用高級詞匯和高級句型使文章顯得更有檔次．4．最后還要認真查驗是否有漏寫情況，有無拼寫錯誤及標點誤用等
高分句型一：
I still remember how nervous I was on my first day in this new school several months ago，when I found it difficult to follow my English teacher in the first English class．
我仍然記得幾個月前我來到新學校的第一天當我發現我的英語很難跟上老師的時候我有多緊張．
高分句型二：
In the morning class the next day，the English teacher came to me while I was reading the text aloud as other students．
在第二天早上，英語老師走到我身邊當我正在大聲讀課文像別的同學那樣時．

解答 Smile has magical power．I think it can drive winter from people's face．
I still remember how nervous I was on my first day in this new school several months ago，when I found it difficult to follow my English teacher in the first English class（高分句型一）．The teacher spoke English throughout the class，which was totally different from the lessons I had taken before．In the morning class the next day，the English teacher came to me while I was reading the text aloud as other students（高分句型二）．After listening to me for a while，she gave me a big smile and said she liked my voice very much．The smile shined  the whole day and the following days．A week later，I volunteered to take charge of English study in my class．
Thanks to the comforting smile in my first morning class，I begin to become confident．

點評 開放性作文給出一定的寫作主題，并此為基礎進行思維和聯想，自由發揮．不僅考查學生在內容、結構安排、語言運用和組織方面的能力，而且對學生的想像力、發散思維、歸納判斷能力也有很高的要求．