Question

【題目】假設(shè)你是紅星中學(xué)高三學(xué)生李華。停課期間，媽媽過生日，你在學(xué)習(xí)之余給媽媽準(zhǔn)備了豐盛的生日晚餐。請根據(jù)以下四幅圖的先后順序，寫一篇稿件，記述整個過程。

注意：詞數(shù)不少于 60。

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Answer 1

【答案】During the winter vacation, my father and I celebrated my mother’s birthday, which made me feel great.

At eight that morning, I was about to study when suddenly my father came into my room and whispered to me that day was my mother’s birthday. Wow! It was time for me to celebrate it for her. I decided to bake a birthday cake and prepare a rich family dinner in person. After finishing all my work, I learned how to bake a cake on line without delay. It took me a long time to make it. And then, I was immediately busy preparing all dishes.

The moment my mother stepped into, the celebration began. My father expressed his best wishes with a bunch of roses. My mother was moved with tears rolling in her eyes, seeing all we had done. Chatting merrily, we were immersed in the warm atmosphere.

【解析】

本篇書面表達(dá)屬于圖畫作文。

第一步：根據(jù)提示可知，假設(shè)你是紅星中學(xué)高三學(xué)生李華。停課期間，媽媽過生日，你在學(xué)習(xí)之余給媽媽準(zhǔn)備了豐盛的生日晚餐。請根據(jù)以下四幅圖的先后順序，寫一篇稿件，記述整個過程。

第二步：根據(jù)圖片確定文章內(nèi)容和關(guān)鍵詞語，第一幅圖要表達(dá)爸爸告訴作者今天是媽媽的生日；第二幅圖表達(dá)作者從網(wǎng)上搜尋如何制作蛋糕；第三幅圖表達(dá)作者為媽媽制作生日蛋糕，準(zhǔn)備豐盛的晚餐；第四幅圖表達(dá)作者和爸爸為媽媽慶祝生日。關(guān)鍵詞語有：celebrate my mother’s birthday, bake a birthday cake, prepare a rich family dinner, on line, express best wishes，Chatting merrily, warm atmosphere.

第三步：根據(jù)提示和關(guān)鍵詞（組）進(jìn)行遣詞造句，注意主謂一致和時態(tài)問題。本文用一般過去時。

第四步：連句成文，注意使用恰當(dāng)?shù)倪B詞進(jìn)行句子之間的銜接和過渡，書寫一定要規(guī)范清晰，保持整潔美觀的卷面是非常重要的。