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【題目】假定英語課上老師要求同桌之間交換修改作文，請你修改同桌寫的以下作文。文中共有10處語言錯(cuò)誤，每句中最多有兩處。每處錯(cuò)誤僅涉及一個(gè)單詞的增加、刪除或修改。

增加：在缺詞處加一個(gè)漏字符號（∧），并在其下面寫出該加的詞。

刪除：把多余的詞用斜線（\）劃掉。

修改：在錯(cuò)的詞下劃一橫線，并在該詞下面寫出修改后的詞。

注意：1.每處錯(cuò)誤及其修改均僅限一詞；

2.只允許修改10處，多者（從第11處起）不計(jì)分。

Last week, my friends and me went to watch Jay Chou’s performance in Guangzhou. There are crowds of cheerful fans there, many of who came from other cities. Jay began his performance with one of his most famous song. We all cheered and shouted out his name, but some even cried with joy. When Jay began to sing the seventh song it called Sunny Day, it started to rain. Therefore, the concert was not interrupted and we got even more exciting in the rain. At last, Jay finished the concert with a speech, thank his fans for always supporting him. What memorable experience!

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【解析】試題分析：本文介紹一次難忘的經(jīng)歷——周杰倫廣州演唱會。

1.此處是句子主語，所以用代詞主格，故把me---I。

2.根據(jù)Last week,可知句子用一般過去時(shí)態(tài)，故把are---were。

3.介詞of后面用指人用whom引導(dǎo)定語從句，故把who---whom。

4.根據(jù)one of，可知后面用名詞復(fù)數(shù)，故把song---songs。

5.句意：我們都?xì)g呼起來，大聲喊出他的名字，有些人甚至高興地叫了起來。此處表示遞進(jìn)的并列關(guān)系，故把but---and。

6.句意：被叫做Sunny Day的第七首歌曲。此處是過去分詞做后置定語，故把it去掉。

7.根據(jù)it started to rain.和the concert was not interrupted可知上下句表示轉(zhuǎn)折，故把Therefore---However。

8.句意：在雨中我們變得更興奮。故把exciting--- excited。

9.此處是現(xiàn)在分詞做伴隨狀態(tài)，故把thank--- thanking。

10.句意：多么令人難忘的一次經(jīng)歷！可知在What后面加a。