Question

假如你是李華，最近你校同學就如何對待公共場所吸煙、吐痰等不文明行為展開了討論。大家的不同意見主要在于是該提醒還是該罰款。下表是討論的結果和雙方理由，請根據表中提供的信息給某英文報社寫一封信，客觀介紹討論的情況。

大多數同學認為	其他同學認為
應該提醒； 違章者可能并沒有看到警示牌。 警示可以幫助他們意識到所犯的錯誤，并自覺改正。	應適當罰款。 一般來說，人們會從教訓中學會遵守規則； 違章者通常是“貫犯”，提醒他們通常已不再起作用。

詞匯： 吐痰spit/ 罰款 fine      文章開頭已經寫好

Dear Editor,

       I’m writing to tell you about the discussion we recently had about how to deal with bad behaviors in public, like smoking and spitting. This is, to remind or to fine.  _____________________________                                        

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Answer 1

Dear Editor,

       I’m writing to tell you about the discussion we recently had about how to deal with bad behaviors in public, like smoking and spitting. This is, to remind or to fine.

       The majority of us are for reminders. They think that those who have done something wrong may not have noticed the warning signs. And reminders will surely help them to realize their mistakes and correct them willingly.

       However, the others think these people should be fined because, generally speaking, people will not learn to obey rules unless they are taught a lesson. What’s more, those who go against the rules are usually frequent wrong-doers. Reminders won’t work on them any longer. Meanwhile they suggest these people should be fined properly.

解析:

文筆要非常流暢，要把握所有要點，同時以“我”為中心，詳細說明自己對志愿者工作的理解，以此來表達自己的決心。要用詞恰當，表現要比較充分，具備一定的說服力。詞匯和語句的運用要正確。